Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2021 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 3

Well, since my real name is Peter and I got a huge fetish for docs, I have to say I would absolutely hate it if Pete ended up not being immune, Ellie was immune and we end up seeing a bloodbath with her boyfriend... I'm gonna feel as if I'm hurt in real life! Unfortunately I think this was kind of hinted that he isn't immune by him being a bit "Under the weather" but I can still hope nevertheless. Regardless, maybe we get to see them both being immune and that's nothing to worry about, or Faith ends up being the only immune person and she gets to have a lot of fun! Also while I get the feeling Ellie is the more dominant person in the relationship I'd love to see Pete assuming command at some point (as well as callum, he does still have power since he isn't 1 inch tall) or at least him getting some kind of redemption and seeing how Ellie and him are when they aren't fighting.  I've set this story up in my mind as a "couples have fun with tinies" kind of story. Stories that start off and make us like both people in the couple only to end up having one of them (usually the male) shrink and the normal sized one suddenly lose all interest in them aren't my cup of tea... I just think if one is loved when they're normally sized, they can be loved while being tiny as well ^^

That being said I am interested to see how Faith and Callum end up! I actually quite liked the fact that when Faith learned Callum isn't immune instead of just laughing at him and going something cruel/mean, she had him eat her out, it satisfied me in a good way, I expected her to just suddenly lose all respect and love she has for him which would have ticked me off definitely..!

As you can tell I do definitely look forward to more Pete/Ellie focused chapters.. After all, I do love to sometime put myself in the shoes of a character in a story and in this one I have a reason to do so as well! That, combined with my obsession with docs and gore will surely provide some interesting reactions!

All in all I'm interested to see where this story is gonna go, I don't necessarily think it's a story that should be dragged out a lot, seems like a 5-10 chapter story to me but I don't know what you have planned! And while I'm hoping for the "couples love each other and have fun with tinies" type of story, I'll most probably read the story regardless of how it turns out, I'm just hoping for frequent updates, this is my favorite story at the moment! Then again, you can't rush perfection!

Keep up the great work!