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Reviewer: broccoli125 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2021 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 10

(Minor typo in Ch. 9: "He didn't want to let her know that he stated his own appetite")

 

Regarding your Ch. 10 Author notes about not being the typical story: In case you haven't read it, Neverquest (and apparently, other books in Adelais series, though I haven't read them) by Cassadria https://www.giantessworld.net/viewuser.php?uid=1643 seem somewhat similar in being plot-driven (somewhat explicitly - see the Author's respnse to plzBgentle's review at https://www.giantessworld.net/reviews.php?type=ST&item=3265). Though even that story has obvious giantess stuff early on... funny enough, the story with the highest proportion of time without explicit giantess content on this site I can remember might be Choose your Own Dish https://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=3910 . (To be clear: I *like* how this story is plot-driven, and my guess is that is because I like this particular story-universe.)

Personality traits of the characters seem a bit strange at points in this chapter - while it's believable that Harrison would try to attack the woman with a chair out of anger or something after being trapped in the room, or that the woman would act the way she did when asking Harrison what death is, they didn't feel like how I guessed they would act based on their previous actions (I guess that Harrison is intended to be a generally impulsive character, but deciding to attack the thing that just effectively created a room to trap him in and regrew him feels more impulsive than anything he did before). I guess the woman's actions here might make sense if the point is that she doesn't have "a personality" yet, but rather just has emotions mostly tied to the current situation, (mostly) independent of the previous situation.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2021 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 10

For a scene that's just conversation you've made it really engaging! So an AI wants to be a real girl? Things are only getting more interesting. 

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