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Reviewer: Ponei Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2021 11:40 PM Title: Vicky Gets Ethan Back to School

I hope you'll make an interlude for Sue where she finds love. I hate to see her sad



Author's Response:

Trust me, you have not seen the end of Sue. There aren't any meaningless characters in this story. The teacher Mark White, Sue, hannah, Jackie's mom we've referenceced quite a few times - all of them will play larger roles in the chapters to come. Though it'll be a few chapters til we see Sue again. Make no mistake though, she will have a good amount of focus as will all the characters we've introduced so far.

Reviewer: Pluto Pendragon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2021 12:52 AM Title: Vicky Gets Ethan Back to School

This is one of those stories that I've enjoyed a lot more the longer it has gone on! This chapter was by far my favorite, and I'm loving the changing character dynamics. Well-written, interesting stuff. I'm eagerly anticipating more, so please keep it up! Take care.

-Pluto



Author's Response:

Thank you! Long road ahead that's for sure. Vexed is a very gifted writer, brings my outline to life. Also looking forward to your next chapter as well ;) -jsm109

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2021 6:11 AM Title: Vicky Gets Ethan Back to School

Wow, this was one of your best chapters in my opinion. Not only was it centered on Ethan and Vicky, but also the scene with Hannah and Mr. Rice was great too. 

The look on Vicky's face when Hannah told that story was intriguing. She seemed split between worried about Ethan, but also turned on by how Hannah's mom handles Mr. Rice. 

Part of me is a little jealous of Mr. Rice. I don't know much about Judy, but if she's a hot mom that likes to use shrunken guys as sex toys, then she might be my second favorite character. 

Vicky is still my favorite character though, especially when she pinned Mr. White with her crotch in chapter 2. When she was pinning Ethan to the wall with her kisses, part of me was hoping she would slide him down lower, haha. 

Well, looks like Ethan is about to repay Vicky for rescuing him. I can't wait to see what she does to him!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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