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Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2021 2:36 AM Title: Duty

Thanks for all these updates.

Glad to see Claire keep her priorities straight and not go full power hungry like most stories. Can see Ben getting into more trouble with Malinda.

Wonder if Malinda will ever realize that she is getting into even more trouble when Claire gets her hands on her again.

Seems Alphas are blinded by their size and power they forget that they used to be normal size but guess this is where Claire comes in to balance it out. Wondre if Claire will make more giant women to join her.

Keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words.  Alphas are the best, raised to believe it.  They struggle to see anything else as important.

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2021 12:23 AM Title: Duty

Great transition chapter. I can see where this is going and I'm certainly invested in the characters. I'm glad you're going for flow and groundedness as opposed to the gotcha surprises. Thanks for the update and look forward to the next.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  This really concluded the Arc where we got everything established.  The world can expand pretty big here, so looking forward to exploring it!

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