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Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2021 2:34 AM Title: Causing a Ruckus

That darn Malinda, always up to no good! Another intriguing chapter with characters I care about. Great work!

Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2021 11:26 PM Title: Causing a Ruckus

Loving the interaction between Ben and Claire.  Also amused by the convergence at the end of the chapter between both couples.  Out of minor curiosity, is Cass going to be the biggest in size in this story?  I'm assuming she will be, but I'm keeping open the possibility that there might be someone around her size or bigger, particularly a future antagonist.  That would certainly add some suspense to the story, should you choose to consider that.  No pressure either way, just wondering out loud.  Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

I don't want to give any spoilers out regarding new characters, but Cass is at the high end for this story.

Glad you are enjoying. Will continue adding as I get time to write.

 

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