Date: October 25 2021 9:39 AM Title: Rescue
Fantastic story so far! I do have some questions about Jisoo's family though.
1) Byung-ho isn't actually Jisoo's biological father, right? The story told to his ex-wife was false?
2) Is there a reason why Daiyu Fang's descendants go by a different surname (Chen)? If the clan's naming convention is matriarchal in nature (passes down through women), why would the surname change?
3) Are there male members of the Chen Family, or does the bloodline only produce women? It is mentioned earlier that both Jisoo and Grace started off as specks and went through an ascension later in life. Would males not go through this ascension and have to stay specks? It would be an interesting family dynamic to have all female family members be normal sized and all males be specks.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the comment!
1) Correct, Byung-ho is her adoptive father and Tae-yeon is an adoptive older sister.
2) This will be said later but it's a pretty non-important spoiler: Chen is the surname of Baochai Fang's first husband, and after she assumed control of his company she decided to use Chen instead of Fang since it was more marketable to English-speakers.
3) There are male members of the clan, but you'll find out later what life is like for them!
[Report This]Date: September 28 2021 2:05 AM Title: Rescue
I completely understand the premise of this site, but considering I'd imagine the point of the story is to give a decent amount of plot with the giantess fetish, Grace just annoys me.
My issue stems from the inconsistency. She acts as a vigilante dealing out cruel punishment to speck-abusers, just like her cousin, and yet she literally just enslaved a good guy, who for all intents and purposes just wanted to save his sister. He never hated specks, hurt them or oppressed them.
At this point if the entire point of Grace isn't to be a sadistic pet-keeper I just want an admission of it. Because that's all I really see her as now, the kinky sadistic hot asian woman of the story.
I apreciate sadistic female characters in stories/movies etc. A lot of media usually don't portray women as sadistic, at least in regular entertainment, when in fact they easily can be. My problem is it's just it's like she turned a switch. The sadism was there a bit in the beginning, but now it's on full blast.
Don't get me wrong it's basically the hottest part of the story for me when Grace is in action, especially when she first captured Claire, the disregard she gave for literally entombing someone in her footwear was just crazy, but god damn I hate how she thinks of herself as a good person sometimes. Her actions with Thomas clearly shows she's not, sometimes her actions allign with "good".
Overall though, this is one of the best stories I've read on this site. Honestly probably the best that's still here and not deleted or banned off the site. You don't just throw kinky scenarios with no plot or dialogue, you give a semblance of a story, even if the plot itself is so far-fetched its funny at certain times.
Anyway thanks for writing so far, this story has been grat so far. I just wanted to get these thoughts out of my head and on electronic paper.
Author's Response:
"Kinky sadistic hot asian woman" is probably the profile description Grace uses on dating profiles lol.
There are almost 8000 stories on this site and that is very high praise to hear that this is among the best of them! Thank you very much, I definitely try to balance plot and sexual content as much as possible. Ultimately this site and most of its stories are intended to be pornographic, although there are many examples of genuinely good stories to read for more than just to smut. So whenever I put pen to paper so to speak it's a delicate act to make sure that there is not copious amounts of meaningless sex but also not an overload of strictly world building and character development some readers are not here for. I am pleased to hear the pace so far has been pretty good!
[Report This]Date: September 24 2021 3:32 PM Title: Rescue
Good stuff again. I love this story. You haven't given up. Please try to maintain this high quality.
To many writers with good stories at some point give up and write annoying chapters.
Author's Response:
Sometimes you can tell an author has lost either their motivation for a story or they pump out chapters they clearly put little effort into. I definitely want to avoid that, especially since this is a longer story and I plan to invest a lot of time into it and readers also invest a lot of time into it as well. Hopefully each chapter that comes out only increases in quality as opposed to the opposite!
Date: September 12 2021 10:26 PM Title: Rescue
Read later
Author's Response:
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[Report This]Date: July 12 2021 8:50 PM Title: Rescue
I love the duality of this story. Gentle and nurturing, contrasted by Tae's violent urges. For now, these two stories are running parallel to each other, but it seems they may cross soon. Hopefully Eren can make it out of this with his heart intact. He's the only truly innocent one so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: June 06 2021 11:10 PM Title: Rescue
A very unique story that I'm glad to have read so far, it's quite rare that we get a story that mixes gentleness and cruelty like this, or that lets us enjoy the sweet bliss of well-deserved revenge. Looking forward to where you take this in the future, wherever that may be, and I'll be eagerly awaiting future chapters.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I hope the direction the story begins to take from now is to your liking.
[Report This]Date: June 06 2021 1:54 PM Title: Rescue
This story is FANTASTIC. Turnabout and revenge are old tropes but you're managing to knock it out of the park in such a creative way while giving us small little tidbits of Tae's past throughout the story to show us why she feels how she does and how she's able to do what she's doing. All of the size interactions have been super hot and it's been delicious seeing these former bigs getting their comeuppance once they're small. The bartender getting thrown in the toilet was so disgusting and hot. It's hard to say whether or not the punishment fits the crime, but that's part of why Tae is an interesting character, because she's not perfect so we have to flinch at the thought of "does this bartender deserve to get pissed on and flushed just because she looked the other way when Eren was getting tortured?"
I haven't written anything in a while so take my critique with a grain of salt due to how rusty I am, but this last chapter seemed a little confusing with the way you laid it out. I feel like it would have flowed better if you started with Tae going to the airport to get Grace and then once Tae got the text on Sylvia's phone, jumping forward in time to Alice being captured.
It's a small thing but I think it would make it less confusing as to the timeframe.
Also, the scene with Sylvia getting captured and shrunk was so incredibly well-done with Sylvia slowly starting to realize that something wasn't right until the terror at what was happening washed over her. That slow-burn really let us appreciate her fall from grace, so it was disappointing to not get a similar scene with Alice. It felt a little bit rushed to me. I was actually hoping to see a scene where Grace worked with Tae to get that job done!
Either way I'm loving this story and can't wait to see where else you take it. Cheers and thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
I greatly appreciate your response!
I definitely agree that revenge can be overdone in fiction, I am elated to hear that I am keeping the tale original, and of course sprinkling in the size scenes which does beg the question if Tae is going too far or not with her actions, and the mystery why she cares so much.
Regardless of how much you write I think that's really good criticism which after reviewing the chapter I wholeheartedly agree with. Since I know where the story/chapter is going I can forget that the reader doesn't have all the information I do or my thought process which can make it confusing. Since time/flashbacks will happen at certain points in future chapters I wanted to introduce the concept, but think I missed the mark here.
Between Alice and Sylvia, I had not thought to include Alice's capture since Tae and Grace were not the ones to do it (at least directly), and thought the scene would be too similar to Sylvia's capture but would lack any surprise factor since by that point the reader would be aware of what was happening, whereas with Sylvia she and the reader learn what is going on at the same time. However I concur, it would have been really cool to see how that went and perhaps it will be explained more later! I definitely appreciate how much thought you put into the review and will make efforts to prove how the reader is able to interpret the passage of time in the story!
Date: May 28 2021 4:22 AM Title: Rescue
very interesting. curious that if the tiny girl in the photo is tae herself
Author's Response:
¯_(ツ)_/¯
Date: February 24 2021 11:14 PM Title: Rescue
A tiny guy named Eren, in a world of giants...
Author's Response:
Yah I'm a big fan of AoT/SnK, loving the new season so far
[Report This]Date: February 24 2021 6:11 PM Title: Rescue
This is a phenomenal start. I'm a big fan of the knight in shining armor role reversal, especially against the cruel backdrop. Look forward to seeing how it unfolds!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I hope you enjoy future updates as well