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Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2021 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 4

"The whole house shifted and changes formed."

"Sure, he wasn’t supposed to change himself without specifically stating it,[...]"

" “Oh Jake… I’ve loved you for so long.” she sighed,[...]"

"[...]when I’m leaking.” she explained,[...]"

"Do you mind if I pick you up to make it easier?” "

" “Uh, yeah, sure.” "

"I’m just a little confused about how to use them, but I guess I’ll find it out soon enough.

"He could see that they all looked like very little kids, at best, compared to her,[...]"

"Making people shrinks…" <- delete the s

For once I took the most popular option with Growth Milk. I am still surprised how far Jake takes his reality bending as far as Jackie's Breasts go.



Author's Response:

Well I am a breast man so... you know... I kind of have to implement it. Even if hips and asses are obviously also great !

Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2021 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 4

My vote is number one on the poll. I hope that Jackie's milk sprays on the crowd, causing them to shrink. Jackie has to sit down later because she is tired walking with the huge jugs. She doesn't notice a person she shrunk with her milk is already sitting where she wants to sit. the person falls into the butt crack and struggles to escape. the person gets pulled into her asshole and Jake has to pull that person out. just an idea for the shrinking milk.



Author's Response:

Sadly, no shrinking milk in the end... but something crazy may come down, depending on the next vote I guess ^^

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