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Reviewer: tranc Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2021 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Letter

Great story it grabed me from the begining to the end of the story so far, please keep writing more of Joseph's penances for his wife, and at the same time fullfilling his online role players predatory fantasies. 



Author's Response:

That's great to hear! I'm really glad it was gripping all the way throughout as I was a little concerned I was taking a little too much time getting to the "good parts," but I'm personally of the mind that the good parts are better after being thoroughly built up to by good situational dialog. 

I'm already working on the next chapter. Thank you so much for the positive words! It means a lot to me and helps motivate me to keep doing this. 

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2021 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Letter

Really enjoyed reading this, it's a fantastic setup with so many options where it goes next, who knows what might happen! Very much looking forward to the next encounter.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Gershwin!! Always means a lot to get feedback from you, especially considering how long I've been a fan of your work! 

The best thing about this setup is the potential! I'm sure I won't let you down! 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Gershwin!! Always means a lot to get feedback from you, especially considering how long I've been a fan of your work! 

The best thing about this setup is the potential! I'm sure I won't let you down! 

Reviewer: brett533 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2021 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Letter

YES your back! Awesome start, just wish there was more detail in the stomach (just a suggestion not a complaint). Overall love where this is going and cant wait for more.

Can you re upload streamlined again if you don't mind.



Author's Response:

Good to be back! Ya know? In some ways, I never left. (Lol) 

And I could always stand to add more detail SOMEWHERE, but this was originally meant to be just a brief setup for the situation and it turned into 12K+ words. But I assure you, there will be plenty of opportunities for more detail later. It's a perfectly fair concern. Lol. Be it in words or drawings, we all love our internals. ;) 

thank you for your reading and your review! I've begun work on the next chapter! 

And I'm very sorry, but I won't be doing that. 

Reviewer: Zingem Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 17 2021 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Letter

probably one of my favorite setups i've read in a long while. i love the dynamics, love the protag's characterization. looking forward to seeing where this one goes



Author's Response:

That's high praise. Thank you! All this was meant to be was a setup. But I just kinda kept going as I'm often wont to do. I was torn between minimally effective and efficient story-telling and creating the kind of content I really prefer (and did the latter). Lol. 

And I have it planned pretty much through to the end with many stops! 

Thanks a ton for your rating/review! I'm sure you understand how motivating it is to get them! 

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