Date: July 10 2021 4:42 PM Title: Reflection
Tina testing out her water and photosynthesis theory on Eva.
Date: July 10 2021 8:30 AM Title: Reflection
I see a few directions Eva can go in from here:
1) It's obvious that she's wearing down mentally, no doubt aided by physical exhaustion, and it could plausibly become irreversible soon.
2) Eva's starting to get a sense that, if the roles were switched, she'd be just as bad if not worse. That train of thought could lead to a major change in her.
3) Some development at the office, probably from Amy or Dana, could set them both on a different course.
[Report This]Date: July 10 2021 3:28 AM Title: Reflection
The psychological element here is better done than in like 95% of other giant stories, just the way both Eva and Tina think through the predicaments theyve found themselves in and how the reality of the situation presses up against their logical/moral sides is so fucking good in that "pit in the bottom of your stomach" way.
[Report This]Date: July 10 2021 2:19 AM Title: Reflection
Very super chapter again. Every detail in thought nicely written down. So complete I can't add something in my review. To write everything down what a character is feeling in so much detail.
The hardest thing is that because of these mood swings of Tina, adjusting or getting rest is super hard. Again, the chapter describe this in great detail.
I like this weird storm in emotions these two characters got locked in. Eva is learning a lot and maybe change in a better person.
I imagine Tina can't function properly at work or life, because she can't talk to others about her experience, and Eva is always on her mind. She can't fully concentrate on work that is keep piling up. For her, there is also no rest in her mnd because of everything she has to keep into account al time.