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Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2021 10:38 PM Title: A New Tina

Sexual content in this story felt a bit odd at first - it is a logical outcome of Tina's character arc, but I got used to a story that didn't have any entrapment or near-insertion. Having said that, it's also the porny stuff I like, which is good.

Otherwise, what I've said previously still applies. This seems to be coming to a head, and I'm excited to see how it all climaxes, and potentially blows up.



Author's Response:

Hahaha, I know how you feel. To be honest I often worry if this size fetish story has enough size fetish in it. Though it does have its lewder chapters imo. I can only hope the last handful of chapters make folks happy. 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2021 10:53 AM Title: A New Tina

Great chapter again. So much detail and possibilties.

Tina will never be satisfied and will have to deal with so much stuff.
In this you can clearly see she admits she would never lasted if she were shrunken.

She sees to much qualities in Eva and doesn't hate her anymore.

I like how Tina sees some things as to awful, but not noticing that letting someone understand that they aren't a person anymore and remove all self worth at the deepest levels is a faith much worse than death.

Eva gets clearly the hardest mental hits of everything, but slowly but surely Tina also gets her karma.

Where Tina and Amy are on the losing side with is that they are forced to go over boundries they don't want to cross. It is already clear to both of them, the crossed many boundries.
In the last two chapters it is clear that they have to justify to themselves with reasons or the guilt pops up.

Also wondering if the police have already taken her stuff from the office.
Or was in the Eva's house where Tina had visited.

I also wonder if Amy and Tina will keep seeing eye to eye on everything.

There is another boundry I have in mind, that the two will maybe cross.
Destroying someones possesions, something that has sentimental value for Eva, like a car, house, are a precious gift from a loved one.


I love how every action have consequences for everyone and not for Eva alone. That what I like so much about this story. Realistic logistics and real people with feelings, moods, morals and values, etc.

 

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