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Reviewer: Tinywulf Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2008 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ohhhh what a grand story, thanks man for sticking to the sole action, loved it.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it.  I plan on writing a sequel--this time, Maria's actions would be more "deliberate"!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 25 2008 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Heh! B.S., it isn't personal!

Reviewer: Seabee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2008 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

This kind of story is right up my alley!  I really enjoyed it.  I can't wait to find out what happens when Maria learns of her tiny shoe prisoner! 

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!

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