[Report This]Date: April 19 2021 1:48 PM Title: CH3. Teased and Confused
I had a recomendation to read this story, and glad I did!
I'm really enjoying this whole setup, its really sweet and makes me look forward to the more lewd stuff that may occur even more.
I'm happy knowing you'll keep it soft between them (No accidently digesting her new friend!).
You've done well making their behaviour feel realistic, with natural conversations and reactions, while also giving just enough details to make the world feel like a proper place, but not getting bogged down in too much unnecessary details.
Author's Response:
I'm happy you decided to follow their recomendation, glad you liked it! I say the buildup is more than half the battle in a story like this one, so theres more of that to come in the future. I'm glad you like the balancing I've managed so far, hope I'll be able to keep you satisfied with the amount of detail!
[Report This]Date: April 15 2021 1:00 AM Title: CH3. Teased and Confused
I'm happy to say that this chapter was a joy to read! I love the protagonists and can't wait for them to open up about their feelings. The way they act around each other is too adorable! I'll be looking forward to the next installment!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you've enjoyed like it! I tend to lean into fluffy relationships, so I'm glad to see thats being liked!
Date: April 14 2021 6:24 PM Title: CH3. Teased and Confused
I've been waiting for a new chapter, and what do I see? Yet another simply splendid chapter! Really loved the irony of them both having crushes on eachother, and overthinking about it. It makes me s q u e a l. Keep up the good work, but certainly don't burn yourself out! I haven't been this excited on a story in giantessworld.net since... well, ever! Your writing is miles ahead of the droves upon droves of smut stories on this site (Not to discount them, though!) and the comedy sprinkled in is simply amazing. You somehow manage to inject comedy in seemingly simple things, and really make the world alive and even relatable! A great example of this, I think, are the made-up videogame and movie names.
Good luck with writing more!
Author's Response:
I'm glad I'm keeping you interested, your reviews are very much welcome! Your praise brought a massive smile to my face when I first read it, and I'm still smiling. Seriously, high praise!. I decided to make up video games and movies instead of using real ones so people didn't 100% know what they were doing, but got a general idea of what was going on. That and I found it funny lol.
Thank you again!
[Report This]Date: April 14 2021 6:22 PM Title: CH3. Teased and Confused
This is proceeding wonderfully! I love every chapter! And while I really cannot wait to see the romance between them blossom, I know that it will be all the sweeter for having had so much savory development between the two. I am beginning to feel heavily invested in their relationship and want it to go well! I can feel their nerves as they work through their near-identical feelings and fears with regard to one another. It's good stuff! And even better, I just know that whenever you do eventually get around to exploring lewdness between them, it'll be well-earned and entirely organic feeling. I can hardly wait! But I'm also thrilled to see you taking so much care in filling these characters and their relationship out naturally before diving into such things. I can tell you cut your teeth on writing other fiction before.
I enjoyed every conversation and every scene. I especially appreciated their little accident near the end. I imagine it will provide interesting fruit for conversations later! Or at least food for Ryan's thoughts!
Anyway still a 10/10. Relishing the slow burn. And shocked and impressed at so many words per chapter in so little tone, though I can relate to the process.
eager for more! Signing off!
- Xiao
Author's Response:
Thank you again for another splendid review! I'm happy to hear that people are really vibing with Ryan and Lena's relationship, they're surprisingly easy to write, even if I have to push them a little bit to get them places in a timely fashion. One thing I knew I wanted to do with this story was to flesh out a relationship before diving into anything, so thats my focus here.
As for the word count, it's usually a combined total of about 10 hours mixed between writing, proofreading, and editing. It can be a bit much and I'm taking the day off (mostly).
Thank you for another 10/10!
Date: April 14 2021 1:15 PM Title: CH3. Teased and Confused
Love where this is going cant wait for fun!
Author's Response:
Thank you, same lol
Date: April 14 2021 12:38 PM Title: CH3. Teased and Confused
I will write this is an amazing story. Amazing attention to detail in this story.
WOW !!
Please continue.
Please more.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you've stuck around, can't wait to bring you more to read!
[Report This]Date: April 14 2021 11:35 AM Title: CH3. Teased and Confused
Love the characters and slow build. Fingers crossed they get over their jitters soon though haha.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it! They're fairly jittery people, but I hope so too!
[Report This]Date: April 14 2021 4:35 AM Title: CH3. Teased and Confused
Good stuff! Like I anticipated, this story is really fluffy and cute. Love it. I like how flustered they get at even the smallest flirty/sexual hints, it makes me excited to see how they'll react to overt sexual stuff if(when) it happens. I also wonder if the little mishap at the end is gonna make Lena paranoid, or perhaps overly-careful. Regardless, their interactions are still so lovely! Like others have said in the reviews, this genre of gentle stories is clearly striking a nerve with people, myself included.
My only super small suggestion, which will depend on personal taste anyway, would be to maybe consider splitting up your chapters a bit. The finer details can get lost when a chapter is super long imo, and it could make each chapter a bit more digestible. (You could also milk out more reviews that way, but you didn't hear that from me). Regardless, I'm looking forward to what's coming next! Take care.
-Pluto
Author's Response:
I live for the wholesome relationships :), I'm also looking forward to seeing how Lena will act going forward: its gonna be interesting! I'm glad I was able to carve out a niche in the super-gentle giantess genre.
As for your suggestion, I'll probably keep chapters about the same length that they're at now, but I might start splitting them up into two parts for easy digestion. Because, right now, the difficulty people can have while reading this story is that it's a suddon drop of 10000 words instead of a trickle of 2000 or 3000 word chapters. That can be hard to follow, but once the story is complete, it shouldn't feel that way. All the same, since the story isn't all coming out at once, your suggestion makes sense. I won't be going back to modify CH2 or CH3 though, I don't know what that would do to my precious reviews.
I can't wait to get more out!