Date: April 09 2021 1:28 AM Title: CH1. Evicted
Great stuff so far, cant wait to see where you're gonna go from here!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope you'll like it!
[Report This]Date: April 09 2021 12:13 AM Title: CH1. Evicted
Honestly great job. Its well written and doesnt feel forced. I like the chemistry between the two. I cant wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, I'm trying to make a story that clicks properly, so I'm glad that seems to be working!
[Report This]Date: April 08 2021 11:41 PM Title: CH1. Evicted
This is really cute and adorable so far. A great introduction to the world and some of how it works. Very well written and definitely has my attention. Interested in seeing where it goes from here.
Author's Response:
I'm trying my best to get the wholesome pumps pumping, and part of that is a world that compliments it! Thank you for the compliments, I hope I don't disappoint!
Date: April 08 2021 10:49 PM Title: CH1. Evicted
Aww, what an adorable first meeting. Interested to see what kind of relationship develops between these two.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you think so! I'm looking forward to fleshing out their relationship, they're fun!
[Report This]Date: April 08 2021 10:48 PM Title: CH1. Evicted
Excellent start! I like the dynamic from your main characters already, and I think this has great potential to be fuzzy and cute. Your writing is really high quality for your first story, as well. I love these kinds of gentle stories, so I'm looking forward to what comes next! I hope you'll keep it up, and no worries about a slow burner. That just leads to more meaningful payoff, in my opinion. Take care!
-Pluto
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words! I do want this to be a more wholesome story than others on this site, so I'm glad to hear I'm on the right track!
I've written other things (for giantess stuff and non-giantess stuff) so this isn't my first time around the block. Thank you for the review!