[Report This]Date: December 14 2022 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode
I enjoyed this more than I thought would. You do a good job capturing the tone and spirit of the Disney version in your rewrite of the scenes and it's great to see an iconic character who influenced all of us here get to live happily ever after as giant goddess.
Do you think you are going to do any more fanfic rewrites of famous giantess centric scenes?
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I've considered a few one-shots of other gts-themed stories, either from movies or from TV shows. For the time being (as of this writing), I'm juggling three different anime fanfics involving gts elements. So until I either complete one of them or get bored and shelf it for another time, I can't promise anything further, but it's something I'll keep in the back-end of my mind for another time.
Again, glad you enjoyed my first attempt at a story on this site.
[Report This]Date: November 13 2021 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode
Some marvellous reinterpretation of how the narrative could've transpired while maintaining key characteristics of the source material. However I'd like to point out that, while it was a cake in the book, the film you're using involved biscuits/cookies.
Author's Response:
Minor material deviation on my part, I'll confess. Leaving aside the cake-cookie dichotomy in this story, I'm happy that this story caught your eye and amused you.
Date: June 22 2021 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode
Well now we know why you took so long to write the last one and it was worth it. The twist at the end to me feels like you left it open for more, like visiting a world where Alice grows up as a giant princess. Maybe you could do more stories in the same vein, a what if series of famous giantess scenes like the mother in Honey I Blew Up the Kid growing even bigger or the Super Hot Giant Alien getting her way in Dude Where's My Car.
Author's Response:
Those are interesting avenues for consideration that you've brought up - particularly the "Honey I Blew Up the Kid" scenario. As for the ending, I was brainstorming a way for Alice to be a giant at the very end after returning home from Wonderland, and in a way that it would not cause panic in her original world. So to remedy that, I ended up altering Alice's world where her family were all giants and decided to make them royalty so that people would revere them (and probably fear them a little, given their size).
I don't know if I'll make another project based on "Alice in Wonderland" or not. For now, I'm considering different stories at the moment, but it's something I'll keep on the shelf for another time if I have the drive to see it though. Anyway, I'm glad you liked the chapter.
[Report This]Date: June 21 2021 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode
It would be better that these stories were based on the Lewis Carroll book than on the Walt Disney animated movie.
Author's Response:
To each their own. Some will prefer the book; others will prefer the movie. I'm of the latter.
Date: May 07 2021 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode
I just wanted show my appreciation for what you’re doing with this. I love the writing and the idea of the “what if this instead...” aspect! Excited for the last chapter! Also curious if you’ll be venturing out to other mainstream giantess/growth scenes and possibly redoing any of those?
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words. I'm glad you like my writing style. Hopefully, I'll be done with the last chapter before the month is out.
As for other writing projects, I've got some things in mind. The original works aren't gts-themed, but I'm hoping to make them so with what I have in mind. I'll find out if I have the drive for them after I'm done with this series.
Date: April 26 2021 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode
I hope for the last one, you let her really humiliate the Red Queen. She was about to lay into her in the original but started shrinking before she could finish it. Maybe now she can really cut her down to size.
Author's Response:
I have something in the works. I don't want to give anything specific away, but rest assured, there won't be any shrinking to stop Alice from putting the Queen in her place.
Date: April 26 2021 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode
I can't tell you how rarely I write reviews, but after reading the first two chapters and the other reviews, I had to thank you for this wonderful story. It is clearly very true to the original in tone and theme. But I feel no one else has commended you on the *giantess*
side of it. Your detail in describing *size* is so important to me. You make compelling size comparisons and make clear how BIG she is at any given moment. It's done so well and is truly a rare talent among all gts writers in my opinion. The SIZE is so often ignored like its a given or something. Yes you deviate from the story slightly but thats why it's a giantess story AND an Alice in Wonderland story.
Thank you for your writing. I simply had to compliment what is, in my opinion, nearly perfect giantess writing. Thank you and well
done sir.
Author's Response:
I'm flattered you consider my work nearly perfect. I simply felt compelled to try my hand at putting forth a form of giantess fanfiction after partaking of a number of stories on this website. I tend to find descriptors of size to be the most tantalizing aspect of gts-themed literature, so I'm glad that I've caught your interest with this series of one-shots. Hopefully, the last chapter will be entertaining with what I have in mind. In any case, I'm happy that you like what you've read so far.
[Report This]Date: April 13 2021 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode
I really liked this chapter - as I often imagined as a kid, both watching one of the many film versions or reading the novel, what if she downed the whole box?
Granted, more often I thought about Alice interacting with the White Rabbit trying to protect it's carrots and she not taking a bite off the Carrot, but instead eats the Rabbit and the Carrot both at once, just after the Rabbt exclaimed "Aber nicht mich, du Gierschlund!" (But not me, you glutton!")
Come to think of it that probably was my earliest Vore Fantasy...
Regardless, I really liked what you did to the Wonderroom Scene even if "cutting" the sea of tears is a massive (no pun intended) deviation.
I am a little sad that this will be strictly based on the Disney Movie as I like the "giant" Puppy Scenes quite a lot and Alice growing and ripping out the mean Flowers from the garden would be quite satisfying as well.
But instead of "mourning this loss"; I will rather look forward to to Alice growing within(or maybe even out off) the House of the Royal Announcer and especially the End of the Trial.
On a more general note: You really hit the personalisaton of the characters well in your original scenes (at least so far). As Characters often kinda "derail" in the realms of Fanfiction this is really worth praising.
So feel praised now! That's order 42, the oldest in the book! ;)
Author's Response:
I appreciate the enthusiasm in your review. The 1951 film was something of an inspiration for me and got me into the gts realm from an early age. I try to keep Alice generally peaceful in how she interacts with other characters she meets in Wonderland, hence the rating I gave this story. I don't want to outright give away the plot of each chapter, but I'm trying to find a way to have it end with Alice remaining a giantess in some way that might be at least somewhat plausible within the story's universe.
Also, I appreciate the praise regarding the character personalisation you brought up. In matters of fanfiction, where the author basically deviates from the original story and goes down a unique path, it feels somewhat of a gamble in how the creator of the story portrays the characters and how they would react in a way that appears generally in line with their personality. So I'm glad you like the path I decided to go down in this version of the Alice in Wonderland story.
Date: April 12 2021 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode
Wow, did you a splendid job here! Captures the feel of the original book, and I'm very excited to see where you go with it!
Author's Response:
Thanks. I try to commit to the film as much as I can before I decide to take over the story. The movie is what got me interested in the gts genre, so I felt like trying my hand at writing something based off of an early childhood inspiration so to speak.
Date: April 12 2021 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode
I hope we will see alternate endings to the rabbit house scene and trial. I kind of wish she had just burst through the house instead of just being stuck there. Maybe she grows and sneezes so hard she actually sends the White Rabbit flying.
In the trial she could remain a giant and proceeded to humiliate the Queen as she intended.
Author's Response:
I'm hoping to do a chapter for each scene in the film, so four altogether. And yeah, I'm gonna try to have her stay a giant in each one. It's just a matter of getting creative in where I choose to deviate from the film and take the story down my own hypothetical path is where it gets tricky. At least it'll feel tricky for me as I type it out.
[Report This]Date: April 12 2021 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode
I was a big fan of the old Alice in Wonderland when I was younger. This story was pretty faithful to the original, and I loved the reactions of the characters. I love the caring nature of Alice when she tries to apologize to the doorknob.
I do hope to see more of this story, and would like to see where you would take it in the next chapter. I hope there might be more moments with her feet (playful or unaware) in the future, but its just a suggestion. Good luck with the story.
Author's Response:
I appreciate that. I'm somewhat of a slave for details, so I watched the scene several times over trying to get as much detail into the story as possible. I also wanted to maintain Alice's overall behavior in the film while going down a different road. Figured she would still be the same curious, yet considerate young lady as she was portrayed in the Disney film.
I'll try for more one-shots in this story, though they won't be interconnected with each other (obviously). Basically they will commit to the original movie up until a certain point when I take a gamble and enter into the realm of hypothetical. Anyway, thanks for the encouragement.
[Report This]Date: April 12 2021 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode
I was hoping someone who knew their way around the keyboard and had a way with words would make such a story. The ever present "what ifs" that I entertained when I saw the movie now being put to print.
Thanks for trying your hand at this and I do hope you do manage the rest/more.
It was faithful up until this version of Alice opted to not cry an outright pool and still stayed within the voices of the characters afterward. I was entertained by the descriptions and how Alice tried to make amends.
Though the Doorknob can't very well see the world from his newfound position tucked away. I would think he would be on her shoe like a buckle or in her hair in her bow or tied somehow. The shoe would jostle though, and the crown of her head would just afford him a view of the sky - which is still more than the walls and ceiling and floor he was bound to.
Author's Response:
It was something of a gamble from the point Alice became a giant. I gave it a thought over about what might happen if she ate more than one "Eat Me" cake in this scene. Given the circumstance of her growth, the cake box would be somewhere in front of her, given what was seen in the film, so if she simply searched for it and had another cake, what might possibly happen? Given that I preferred a large Alice compared to a small one, I tried to end this one-shot with her staying a giant (in this case a bigger giant).
As for the Doorknob, I tried to figure what to do with him once Alice outgrew the hallway. Given her propensity to apologize when she believes she has done wrong, I figured she would bring him along as a companion of sorts to make up for her growth. Since she has placed other items in her apron in the Disney film, I figured that would be an easy enough place to store him on her journey.
Thanks for the enouragement and I'll see what I can come up with in future chapters.