[Report This]Date: May 17 2021 12:44 AM Title: Contact
Hey, I just saw your update in the story description and I wanted to let you know that I'm wishing you the best. I'm really sorry to hear that you're going through a tough time right now, and that you've lost inspiration for this story. Do what's best for you first, and if you ever decide to revisit the story then I'll certainly be reading. Until then, I hope things get better. Take care.
-Pluto
Author's Response:
Thank you Pluto and I'm glad you saw the update.
I'm okay now but inspiration may never return. Rarely ever does. I might write anotherr story down the line but I'll try and make it one chapter that way I can finish it more succinctly.
Have a good one and thanks for always commenting.
Date: May 10 2021 2:57 PM Title: Contact
Damn no new chapter, thats sad. This was getting really good.
Author's Response:
Sorry, friend, I lost inspiration to continue the story.
However; all I can tell you that I had planned for the "benefit" the heroine gets was she would be extremely successful in everything.
A bandit attacks? He trips and breaks his skull on a rock.
A scandalous merchant flees town, dropping gold at her feet without noticing.
Etc, stuff like that.
[Report This]Date: April 16 2021 7:57 PM Title: Contact
They're so cute!! I really like how he was able to pick up on her feelings towards him right away. I think that'll make for an interesting dynamic later on. I also love how quickly he's coming to trust her, and I bet she's really happy about that as well. Lastly, I'm really curious as to how her life has been affected by the exchange, so I'm looking forward to finding out! I'm really enjoying this story, so thank you so much for continuing it! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
-Pluto
Author's Response:
I appreciate the support bro. Also Amelie's luck is broken now (needs nerfed). It kinda works on a scaling factor; the worse Luca's disabilities are, the stronger she got proportionately. And Luca's super vulnerable and at a huge disadvantage now, so I'm planning to try and show Amelie's ability off somehow in the next chapter. It may even end up that there won't be much conflict in this story, but that's just how it goes. I don't want Amelie to turn out to be One Punch Man, if I can help it. Thanks for the comment Pluto I appreciate ya
Date: April 16 2021 5:25 PM Title: Contact
Hmm, how exactly did the magic work? Did Luca transfer luck, potential, and/or fortune to Amelie? If she has an increased chance to say become rich or powerful, does Luca have the opposite? Increased chances for misfortune and bad events to happen to him? Seeing how small he is, not sure how he can survive increased misfortune or death events. Even if Amelie makes good on her promise to love and care for him, and ensuring a good life to support him and makeup for his sacrafice, I think plenty of chances for him to die or be seperated from her will occur.
Author's Response:
In my mind, it works a bit differently than that. I may not even get a chance to explain that in the story, but basically Luca will have neither good nor bad luck anymore. All the bad luck for the rest of his life was used up and gave him two severe disabilities, and all the good luck went straight to Amelie.
It's going to be difficult to show just how OP she's about to be, but as long as Luca's near her, he will be fine. The minute he's too far away or separated somehow is when he's vulnerable again.
Whatever Amelie wants or desires will probably happen somehow; and she's constantly going to be wanting and desiring Luca's safety.
Basically I want to say "don't worry, he'll be fine as long as they're together and he's fucked if he's away for too long" but that's a lazy explanation.
Good question though fam