Date: August 27 2021 4:53 AM Title: A Shocking Development
While I skipped over the sex scenes, I still really really enjoyed this. I was rooting for Teddy until the gambling, and then he just got worse. You nailed that descent from caring dude to controlling and manipulative within a few chapters. And it was subtle too, but Birthday Bash was the point of no return. Bad enough he changed her name and her license and then was super condescending before. I also didn't think I'd like Wilma until that ending. She's found good people
Date: April 14 2021 7:11 PM Title: A Shocking Development
This is a fantastic start! It is incredibly well written and knowledgeable with some extra details on air conditioners. I feel like I know more now than I ever did about those things. Looking forward to a G/t story! Rarely see that here!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I was looking for a complicated enough device that I could reasonably have it shrink somebody, and ended up spending far more time than was probably needed looking at different designs. I'm by no means an expert, but you can find a good amount of information about them if you're interested, which for some reason, it seems I was. :-p.