[Report This]Date: May 19 2021 11:53 PM Title: Patricia
Ok, Patricia seems hot and ripe for Giantess content.
(plus the line about her tongue stud being used as dildo was gold)
However I still think she's fucking horrible for what she did to Gabby, and how she treated her.
And Teddy!?!? Tiny_Signifigance was right in their review, he's basically holding his wife in a marriage because if she leaves she won't have any of the comfort or stuff she's worked for to get.
And he basically forgot all his wedding vows and his promises to her, because he misses having some pussy wrapped around his cock.....what an asshole!!!
And then he condescends to Gabby about how this is for her!?!?
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(calming breath)
This is not a bash against your writing of this story, it is really well written and I love the content.
And it's an achievement to make me this mad about characters (Teddy and Patricia)
Plus the content sexually in this chapter was very well done.
Wilma.....I think she needs to 1) stop saying stuff to upset Gabby, and 2) Handle her own fucking emotions and not run out of the room crying when your employer is covered in cum and bodily fluids and needs help.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story! I'm really happy at how Teddy turned out. He gets a heated reaction from the audience for the right reasons, which is hard to get right consistently. As for Patricia, I don't usually write giantess content, so I'm glad to have had a good enough track record with both this chapter and the Wilma chapters.
As for what Wilma's deal is, she has some things going on in the background that we're getting into later. Just know that there's more coming up for that character. She's acting odd now, but it'll make sense soon.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2021 11:36 PM Title: Patricia
Thoughts on Patricia:
She's a homewrecking bitch who will only make things worse for Gabby, and I dislike her.
BUT! You described her well, and she seems like a sexy chracter to have fun with size wise.
(content wise, it was great the way you wrote Gabby stuck under her ass and the whole unintentional inclusion of her in their fun)
Wilma......really, she needs to learn to read the room better, Gabby is obviously going through a horrific time and she says the wrong things to her, and then rungs off crying....seriously.
Teddy is an asshole still, I hope Gabby gets her happiness, (and get her financial situation back, she worked her ass off for her money and now she's unable to get it if she divorces this prick Teddy!)
I hope Gabby does get happyness, and Teddy winds up with nothing.
You continue to write the content (and story, despite hurting Gabby XD) really well, and I am enjoying it with every new addition.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I was trying to come up with the sort of person who would come into a person's house and have sex with their husband in front of them, and worked from there to get Patricia. Once I had her personality down, the idea for a one-sidely unaware situation just sort of flowed naturally.
Always glad to hear you're still enjoying each new chapter.
Date: May 19 2021 8:23 PM Title: Patricia
Wow, what an unbelievably insensitive bitch! Patty and Teddy deserve each other, I guess. lol
This chapter was a really big turn in the story, as it really solidifies Teddy's infidelity and pretty much makes him past hope.
I really do wonder what will happen to our poor little Gabby... Will Teddy (somehow) come to his senses, and somehow be able to save his relationship with Gabby? Will Gabby find a better man who will treat her right? If she does, will she find a way to leave her awful husband? Will Teddy start to treat her even worse? Can she escape? If she does, what would happen to her? How will Wilma end up playing into it all?
I, for one, can't wait to find out! Keep up the great work! Can't wait to read your other upcoming projects too!