Date: February 10 2015 10:35 AM Title: The Lovely Orchid
Yeah, Aaron is right ! It really is a masterpiece, I so enjoyed this wonderful story !
The feet stuff was perfect, and your way to write it is extraordinary ! Also liked the scene with little Rose, too bad nothing more happened ! And I loved the gentle part, even if he's her pet she's gentle and protective with him.
Really, it was delicious !!
Thank you very much !!
Date: July 13 2010 12:44 AM Title: The Lovely Orchid
wow... that is a fantastic tale! cant believe im the first to review this tale. its stupendous. loved everything about it. the attention to detail, the awesome dialog, and of course the characters.
orchid was finaminal.
'stevie' was incredible realistic.
and rose was awesome because she brought the hand rolled 'cigarette' (loved that whole scene and kudos for making that scene very light-hearted)
i hope that you will start writing on this site again someday.
anyways thanks for posting this, this masterpiece...