Reviews For Short Story - Pool Day
Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2021 11:20 AM Title: Part 1
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Date: June 05 2021 11:20 AM Title: Part 1
Submitted to her boobs, feet, and pussy..... trifecta.....love her disregard for him as he serves her needs at all 3 of these positions!
Author's Response:
yep, that was basically the goal and i think it turned out pretty well despite being relatively short :)
Reviewer: normieREE Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2021 1:50 AM Title: Part 1
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Date: June 02 2021 1:50 AM Title: Part 1
Well written and good pacing. Maybe we could have a bonus chapter that looks into how she treats him in the future?
Author's Response:
thanks! glad you enjoyed. i like leaving it open ended but never say never :)
Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29 2021 7:55 PM Title: Part 1
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Date: May 29 2021 7:55 PM Title: Part 1
Like the story, love that the Mom is ok with her daughter basically dominating her dad with her breasts, butt and toes :) Love all you stories, and as with them, I Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
glad you liked it! thanks for the review