Reviewer: QPRM Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2023 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Farewell

The romance between Hilda and Milton was also very impressive, and I want to know more about their stories. Do you have any thoughts on writing romance for other characters?

Author's Response:

I've never considered the romance aspect to be my strength, but receptions for specific duos in this story have been positive, so that's made me rethink. But I worry that follow-ups to a select few characters of this story would be too specific and have a small general audience. However, I will be opening a commissions page on my profile shortly, where specific requests for stories and characters can be written. I'm already working on a commission where many of my previous characters are included, so everything's possible!

Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02 2023 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Farewell

Did she at least release the whole slavery contract thing? Pretty shitty of her if she didn't after all that talk about redemption.

"Overall, the whole story contains a bunch of ideas I couldn't delve into deeply because the story limited it, so I explore them in different stories."

More accurate to say that the story dragged on at parts and lost some cohesion because the plot swerved left and right at points, rather than say the story limited it. If you want to explore different scenarios like that, why not make a one-shot story thread?

Reviewer: Barachiel Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2022 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Side By Side With A Giant

What in the world has happened that I’m now cheering for Ada?! Great chapter.

Reviewer: angelus288 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2022 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 35 - The Society Underneath

I'm late saying this but I'm glad to see the story continue. So, is Milton and Renard's case of out of the frying pan and into the fire streak going to end?

Author's Response:

No guarantees, I'm afraid

Reviewer: Barachiel Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2022 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 33 - 10 Humans, 1 Giant

Glad to see you back. I almost feel bad for the props, but it’s hard to when it’s Ada Time. I’m glad Henry finally accepted his place.

Reviewer: kenrios Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2021 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Girl in the Yellow Frock

I personally would like Henry and Ada to be in different terms. Basically, if Henry wanted to be with Ada, it was of his own free will. Slavery, while pleasant for Henry at first, will begin to dent his soul in the long run and when Ada no longer wants it she will dispose of him as a piece of trash. At that point I would like Henry to have the opportunity to leave if he wanted to. But knowing Ada, I don't have many illusions. Maybe that's why I didn't like that Henry lost to Ada, but not everything can be the bed of roses in a story on this site, right? What I would like is for Henry at some point to start fighting for his freedom before it's too late. Personally, I would not like this character to have a tragic ending even if it brings him pleasure. He seems too good a person to end up like this. That would be too cruel. I believe that life is not something so trivial as to dismiss it like that.

Reviewer: angelus288 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2021 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 30 - The Arena

Just finished reading the story and I really like it for far. Though I can't help but wonder if the story should be called out of the frying pan and into the fire, because that is what the three MCs' constant situations are. I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: carnage Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2021 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Hero

This chapter was so well done and so much fun to read. The servant putting her toes on the boys head was just perfect. Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: carnage Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2021 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Girl in the Yellow Frock

Great story! I'm only half way through, but I love it. I felt really bad for Ada... I don't know why, I just felt sorry for her. Keep up the good work!

 

Reviewer: Barachiel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2021 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Lost

Nice bit of lore and some new mysteries. Of all the main characters, I like Henry the most. A shame about Ada. I loved their interactions with her, but she's definitely the least 'likable' giant so far. Always a joy to see an email about this story being updated, please keep up the great work!