[Report This]Date: July 21 2023 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Farewell
The romance between Hilda and Milton was also very impressive, and I want to know more about their stories. Do you have any thoughts on writing romance for other characters?
Author's Response:
I've never considered the romance aspect to be my strength, but receptions for specific duos in this story have been positive, so that's made me rethink. But I worry that follow-ups to a select few characters of this story would be too specific and have a small general audience. However, I will be opening a commissions page on my profile shortly, where specific requests for stories and characters can be written. I'm already working on a commission where many of my previous characters are included, so everything's possible!
Date: July 03 2023 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 50 - Farewell
Loved the story. I liked the way Ada developed, though I'm kind of disappointed Henry didn't go with her. I wish he did.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Bittersweet for sure in the sense that they depart, but I tried to make it clear that they would see each other again eventually.
[Report This]Date: July 02 2023 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Farewell
Did she at least release the whole slavery contract thing? Pretty shitty of her if she didn't after all that talk about redemption.
"Overall, the whole story contains a bunch of ideas I couldn't delve into deeply because the story limited it, so I explore them in different stories."
More accurate to say that the story dragged on at parts and lost some cohesion because the plot swerved left and right at points, rather than say the story limited it. If you want to explore different scenarios like that, why not make a one-shot story thread?