Date: June 26 2021 2:15 AM Title: Trial Run
Great worldbuilding with the latest chapter, I remain a huge fan of this story. Surprisingly unpredictable so far in some respects, several directions you could go with this from here. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! <3
Date: June 19 2021 5:39 AM Title: Trial Run
Love the trajectory so far. Really enjoy watching Chris regret what he asked for as Alexis increasingly enjoys it, hope that dynamic continues to progress.
Also liked the subtle expansion of Alexis's powers in Chapter 2, interested to continue exploring what she can do. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
I'm glad someone noticed! I had wanted to elaborate on her powers a bit it in the first chapter, but ultimately found that it messed with the pacing too much.
Date: June 18 2021 11:27 PM Title: Trial Run
Loving this, especially the focus on trapping him right up against her sweaty asshole for long periods. It'd be great to see her make him even smaller down there, or get caught up in an unexpected engagement leading to her forgetting he's there for a while, leaving him in there for the whole day.
Author's Response:
Glad you're liking it! I love using the asshole because its such a degrading part of the body. The idea of a tiny shrinking so far they get lost on it is a powerful one, and while I intend to branch out in the next couple chapters, its definitly an idea I'd like to explore. If not in this story, then another.
Date: June 15 2021 7:23 AM Title: Trial Run
I loved it. This is one of my favorite scenarios. I wrote something VERY similar called Wager Between Friends, if you're interested in checking it out.
I hope you continue this because I feel like the dynamic has a lot of potential that I never explored further. Thanks for sharing :)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it, and I will most definitly be checking it out!
[Report This]Date: June 13 2021 8:19 PM Title: Trial Run
Love everything about this! The fart was a great moment of domination, especially with how that's how powerful it is when she's protecting him. Also, super excited for her cuckolding ideas to come. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed whats here so far! I'm happy that the fart came across as intended, I was a teensy bit worried about how it would be recieved.
[Report This]Date: June 13 2021 7:54 AM Title: Trial Run
Instantly one of my favorites, definitely excited to hear you have more planned. Big fan of Lexi's attitude, wouldn't mind seeing her lean into her power more as it progresses, but it's your story and will be great either way.
Author's Response:
Glad you're liking what's here so far. Most of the time I spent on this chapter was writing and rewritting interactions between the two, so I'm relieved to hear it came across well.