Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2021 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 4: Sacrifice In The Void

So I was right then, and the Devourer ended up surviving unscathed (at least I assume she took no serious damage).  I'm guessing she is going to pursue that ship pretty relentlessly for now.  Any chance of other characters from other planets entering into this story, or even another Devourer as a potential antagonist, assuming there is in fact more than one of them in this world you've created?

Would like to see more of the character development of the Devourer in future chapters.  It would be amusing to see if she develops feelings of guilt and atonement for what she has done, and what she would be able to do as a show of redemption.  Given her size, I would guess that would be a challenging feat for her to do something to make up for it, unless she could somehow shrink her size down so as to be less dangerous when in close proximity to others.  Just something to consider.

Anyways, curious to see where this ends up going.

Author's Response:

You are very Perceptive, I don't want to spoil the story but I'll make sure to keep the story interesting. Thanks again for your support.