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Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2021 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Broken Armada

Interesting to see what the Devourer will do if she is truly experiencing guilt for her past actions or not.  Wonder if she'll try to engage in physical activity with the farmer boy on Earth via her avatar; figure she would have to given her real size.

I'm guessing whatever clash you have going on between the Devourer and the remnants of the armada, it'll end up being a pretty one-sided engagement.  Unless you have a surprise in store and the Devourer can be physically harmed by something that is basically microscopic in scale compared to her.

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