[Report This]Date: June 20 2023 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 52: Seta's Arrival
Ok let's see where this goes.
Author's Response:
Dunno if you'll like it, but I appreciate the review all the same.
[Report This]Date: June 12 2023 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 51: A Quick Visit & A New Visitor
Great to see you come back...just took your time bro nothing wrong with it, your story are fantastic so its worth the wait.
Although i wish that you can continue again with freezing 😅🙏
Author's Response:
I'll see what I can do. For me, it's something of a mix between plot progression in my stories as well as them vying for attention in my head as to who to write about next. In a sense, I have my own harem of harem-themed stories competing for my attention and focus, so it's sort of akin to juggling with them so to speak.
Regarding my Freezing fanfic, I've got an idea on where to proceed next, though I'm not sure if it'll jive with those who have been following it so far, and I'd rather not crank out another chapter if I think it's not up to snuff (I'm borderline OCD about that sort of thing).
Anyways, I've petered on enough about that stuff. I'll try to put out another chapter for either my Freezing fanfic or my Witchcraft Works fanfic in the coming days. Appreciate the love!
[Report This]Date: May 06 2023 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 50: Aoyama Sister Lovefest
Awesome keep it up.
Author's Response:
Glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: April 22 2023 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 49: Suntanning with the Aoyama Sisters
Love it keep it up.
Author's Response:
I appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: February 26 2023 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 48: More Love Drama
Keep it up you are doing great.
So if you don't stop the girls from getting taller soon. You will need to make him more of a man to keep up with ten super tall women. Food for thought.
Author's Response:
I confess that even up to this point that I haven't made up my mind over how tall I want the Hinata women to end up becoming. It won't be as mile-high giantesses, that much is certain. And as for Keitaro keeping up with so many amazonian beauties, I have Kaolla serving as the deus ex machina to that sort of problem, being the scientific wiz kid that she is.
Anyways, thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: December 24 2022 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 47: Shinobu-Nyamo-Kitsune Threeway, Part 2
keep it up doing a great job
Author's Response:
Thanks, I appreciate that.
Date: August 23 2022 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 39: Back to School (Part 3)
Antes creía que tú historia eran con personajes inventados hasta que averigüe que está basado en una anime, ya que no sabía que love Hina era un anime existente lo cual fue bueno porque ahora se como se ven todos los personajes, por cierto como sería un loco herem de gigantas con el anime Pokémon?
Nota: por cierto si bien en tú Historias dice cuál es el tamaño de las chicas con números también me gustaría ver cómo es con imagenes con los tamaños que van teniendo comparados con alguien de tamaño normal, como una tabla de madiciones🚺📐
Author's Response:
Por cortesía, estoy usando Google Translate para mi respuesta, ya que ciertamente no soy fluido en español.
Date: May 12 2022 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 33: A Night With Naru, Mutsumi, and Kanako (Part 2)
Me di cuenta de que a keitero la va bien con su harem en crecimiento lo cual es decir mucho ya que son 13 mujeres, lo mismo que en la historia de el crecimiento de Brooke dónde su novio Mike también tiene suerte y le va bien, a diferencia de la historia del crecimiento acelerado de emma dónde Daniel se siente abrumado y asustado y no le va muy bien, y me preguntaba si con keitero será igual tambien o seguirá llendole bien una ves que sus chicas sean más grandes, ya que parece sentirse exitado con sus chicas cada ves más grandes, como pasa con Mike y Brooken
Author's Response:
Date: May 07 2022 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 30: Confrontation & Hot Spring Developments
ME pregunta si las chicas del harem de keitero crecerán solo hasta 15 pies como dise en la portada o se volverán más grandes? bueno preferible mente a un tamaño considerable de 50 pies verdad
Author's Response:
Todavía no me he decidido por una altura final exacta. Idealmente, planeo mantenerlo por debajo de los 15 pies al final de la historia, dados los desarrollos que tengo en mente. Espero que eso ayude a aclarar.
[Report This]Date: January 30 2022 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 27: Interim Developments (Amalla, Haruka, Kanako, Mutsumi)
I thought you'll be updating freezing today. Still great chapter, ofc there are some taboo part but i can just skip it.
Thx for the update
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying things so far.
[Report This]Date: January 24 2022 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 26: Interim Developments (Shinobu, Nyamo, Sarah, Kaolla, & Mei)
Bruh a love drug lmao...kaolla is damn serious with this
Author's Response:
You've caught on, generally speaking. I'll elaborate more on it in future chapters. Without giving too much away, it'll function as a kind of deus ex machina to a lot of the story. Anyway, thanks for the review.
Date: January 06 2022 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 25: Interim Developments (Motoko, Tsuruko, Kitsune)
FYI I think saying that the age on consent in Japan is 13 is slightly incorrect. I’m not an expert so you might want to look into it yourself, but the way I understand it, while the overall government has ordered it be at least 13 yo, all the Prefactures have decided to set it higher.
Author's Response:
Fair point. I didn't go into too much depth on the topic of age of consent in Japan. At the federal level, the age of consent is 13 (according to the 1907 Penal Code of Japan), though many of Japan's prefectures have passed their own laws to make the de facto age of consent in the range of 16 to 18.
Basically, I brought this up on the grounds of including Mei into the harem, given that I had her age listed at 14, so she's in that legal/moral gray area. But I have a kind of deus ex machina I'm thinking of as a workaround solution to that little problem.
Date: January 05 2022 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 25: Interim Developments (Motoko, Tsuruko, Kitsune)
I think its great to have others opinion and pov too...sincr its would be hard to follow if we only ser keitaro and amalla doing all the work and the harem completed just like that
Author's Response:
Character development can be a tricky thing to cultivate in a way that is appealing and enriches the overall plot. It takes effort, but I like to think that it pays off well if done right. Anyways, glad that I'm holding your attention up to this point.
Date: December 20 2021 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 24: Incoming Assistance and Bathroom Talk
Well i know keitaro will act like this...he is not lying that he likes(maybe loves) everyone but he stil have respect for naru so yeah amalla needs to get naru permission and everyone confession to keitaro
Author's Response:
Bingo.
Date: November 29 2021 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 23: Breakfast, Sexual Angst, Harem Developments, & New Arrivals
I think the descriptions of the sexual appeal are getting a bit repetitive… tho I don’t have any idea myself what can be done about that? Perhaps being more specific and focused would help? Like, focusing on one or two characters doing a specific thing and how that action is currently highlighting their individual traits. Good chapter otherwise
Author's Response:
It's a fair analysis. Much of this chapter was sort of "spur of the moment" when I wrote it, so I didn't exactly have a clearly-defined path on what I wanted it to entail specifically. Sort of became a kind of "filler" chapter, I suppose. I admit I veer off on tangents when it comes to getting descriptive, especially during large group settings. Hopefully the next chapter will be more clearly focused with what I have in mind. I'll try going back to more personal interactions between characters in future chapters. Anyway, I'm happy that this story still holds your attention.
Date: November 16 2021 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 22: Workaround Solutions and More Growing Developments
Thank you so much for the update.
Well the only thing i can say is that, i cant wait to see keitaro face when he saw his 7 footer harem. I hope amalla's maids and worker wouldnt be that surprise to see them
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoy it. I have a general idea on how Keitaro and Amalla's incoming servants will react at the sight of so many towering beauties, but I don't want to give too much away. Hopefully you'll find it amusing.
Date: November 15 2021 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 22: Workaround Solutions and More Growing Developments
Yay this is back. I hope we can see more soon.
Author's Response:
I have an idea for how the next chapter will proceed. Hopefully, I'll have it up before the month is out. Anyways, glad you're still interested in this story.
Date: October 05 2021 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 21: The Morning After, Part 3
Please dont forget this story :" its too good. All of your work are great
Author's Response:
I'm glad this story has caught your eye. I'll try to have the next chapter out before the end of the month.
Date: September 19 2021 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Morning After, Part 3
More F x F stuff please
Author's Response:
I'll see what I can do. I can't promise anything; I can't even promise that you'll like it, but I'll try to make the moments between the Hinata ladies as enticing as I can, to the best of my ability anyway.
Date: August 29 2021 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 18: Confessions and Bedrest
Awesome story! I love the interactions between the characters especially with how they interact with Keitaro now that they're big and still growing.
Keep it up dude!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the praise. This is a harem fanfiction as much as it is a GTS story, so I really want to make the romance moments between Keitaro and the women as juicy as possible. I find the notion of being surrounded by an all-woman flower garden of growing amazons to be rather alluring, especially as they get bigger and bigger.