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Reviewer: eliwoodx Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2021 12:02 PM Title: Character Backgrounds

Hopefully the growth starts soon!



Author's Response:

A few more chapters in and things should kick off in that direction.  I appreciate your patience.

Reviewer: Rolanrunn Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2021 1:38 AM Title: Character Backgrounds

I actually like how you brought a story based on a classic anime. I always did like Keitaro... I just didn't care for all the abuse he went through.

This is pretty well done and I'm looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like what you've read so far.  I'm also not a fan of Keitaro being the proverbial and literal punching bag to the likes of Naru and Motoko.  So while I felt the need to bring it up for the sake of backstory, I don't intend for there to be that type of violence in this fanfic.  Hopefully I'll keep you entertained and hold your attention in the chapters that come next.

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