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Reviewer: silentsilent17 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2022 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 25: Interim Developments (Motoko, Tsuruko, Kitsune)

I think its great to have others opinion and pov too...sincr its would be hard to follow if we only ser keitaro and amalla doing all the work and the harem completed just like that



Author's Response:

Character development can be a tricky thing to cultivate in a way that is appealing and enriches the overall plot.  It takes effort, but I like to think that it pays off well if done right.  Anyways, glad that I'm holding your attention up to this point.

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