Date: August 02 2021 9:43 AM Title: A Familial Situation
Wow, this is a very interesting concept, Rick taking Jake's place because he has more experience with vaginas. Your reveal was cool too, others seem to be confused, but I get what you were going for! Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: July 16 2021 8:57 AM Title: A Familial Situation
Finally, the long awaited chapter and it is so good and hot!
Althoug I was confused at first how did Richard become at the possession of his sister. And then I realized it was flashback. Still it was really good! Great descriptions, mate
Hope there will still be more Heather x Richard action. Thank you, man
[Report This]Date: July 16 2021 5:19 AM Title: A Familial Situation
I was confused on how he went from being inside Kristi to being inside Heather. The whole time this chapter, I thought it was Kristi. I think you could add a note at the beginning of the chapter to say this happened in the past.
Otherwise, good chapter. Made more sense after realizing it was Heather when I read it a second time.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Your confusion is exactly what I was going for, good sir. That's why I purposely didn't mention her name before the "face reveal"or offer a note beforehand. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading!