Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2021 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 2

Hmm, devils adovcate but what if there's nothing evil or malicious about Zoe and Jason and Heather is just having a panic attack from the stress? If Jason was just working more and wanted to go out and be with old friends more often. And if Zoe just accidentally stepped on a random tiny shrinky the other day without realizing it? Heather does say the victim was tiny, bones much smaller then even hers. But all the implications are there, Jason's old fling living in the same town, him sometimes staying out all night without, his obsession with his status and achievements(?). Something about Zoe having an immune-crazy attitude and that she got her new running shoes specifically because they were fun to crush shrinkies in.

If she was an average size woman and her shoes were about half of her current size, she'd maybe be around 18" tall now? Wonder if she's big enough to still have protections or rights or if there's a hard height cutoff built into society. The shortest adult with dwarfism recorded was 21.5" tall so Heather might actually still be considered a full human if she just makes it to 24" currently. There was a delivery boy in your "powerful to Plaything" story, who was like a 3ft tall if they were waist height to Amanda Fletcher. Even if she did have protection status at her current size, whose to say she wouldn't experience another shrink attack and end up under 12"?

Interested to see if the lesbian couple she ran away to will turn out to be a good or terrible decision. We'll probably quickly find out if we see shrinkies in their house, either being cared for as friends/lovers or abused and terrified toys and pets the girls use. I worry the story may end up having no good normal size people in it.

For the darkest timeline I hope we avoid, the lesbians turn towards sexually abusing Heather and then for her to either be handed over to Zoe when she catches sight of her while asking if they've seen her and demands her back, or her mom escapes back to her home, only for Zoe to be evil and unleashs her own abuse on her mom and in the coming days Heather is forced to meet Jason's ex-turned girlfriend as he falunts his affair in front of his wife. And if at some point Haether experiences a 2nd round of shrinking into normal shrinky size and Zoe decides she's worthless as a normal shrinky and crushes her then keep her as a servant.

Reviewer: Weary_Traveler Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2021 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 2

Excited after that ending character description :) Can't wait for chapter 3!