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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2021 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 8

I knew there was more to these two than what Siggy remembered, I'm getting some definite dark undertones from them both but Lex seems like the stronger of the two if we're going by potential evil.

Reviewer: ComradKing Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2021 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 7

Air Force Ones need more representation in GTS spaces lol.

Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2021 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 7

The longer it goes on the more I'm convinced the lesbian couple are decent people, at least by the shrinkism universes standards. It seems Heather hasn't fully embraced her new reality yet if she can see Lex cooing and caring for a shrinkie only half her size AND also hear Siggy's back story about how the couple bothered to pull her out of a trashcan tell her she deserved to be loved and cared for, and still think Siggy would be better off outside. Where Heather? You deliberately chose not to run to one of your same age neighbors after remembering the time she told you met her husband in a lab where they experimented on shrinkies and he casually killed a subject in front of her for running. I think you remember laughing at the story too. Hot mom's best odds are probably to take her punishment and start learning to be a good girl when Emily shows her some care again. Tough, a little degrading, but ultimately still loving.

I fear Heather's going to stay rebellious or unemotional through it all and eventually escape out on the street and into her daughter's arms. But Zoe and her husband are going to be revealed to be cruel and sadistic about her shrinking, and Emily may not feel the desire to get her back if Hot Mom never showed her any effection back. And if Heather has another shrinking spell and dips below a foot tall, would she rather be with playful lesbians and a fellow shrinkie or an abusive daughter and cheating husband?

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2021 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 7

I was not expecting that history for Siggy/Lex given how she has treated her thus far and stockholm syndrome still might be in play but for now she seems happy so its a rare win for one of your tinies.

 

Poor Hot Mom though.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2021 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 6

I was not expecting to see an Owl House reference during my fetish story reading but here were are.

 

Poor Siggy if she is being used a Brillo Pad during dish cleaning.

 

As for Hot Mom she seems to not have it so bad right now, like she ended up with the less well hardcore of the two. Now time will tell if she did or didn't but for now she seems better off than whatever Siggy has priorly or currently suffered.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2021 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 5

I'm enjoying learning more about Siggy.

 

The bands seem like a nice touch in adding to the humiliation of being claimed as a tiny. New and inventive forms of degraditation. 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2021 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 4

Can't wait to learn Siggy's backstory etc.

 

Hot Mom gave it the old college try and you can't fault her for that.

Reviewer: Toerider Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2021 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Yes!  Off to a great start.  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: fosmat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2021 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

Damn, I am really excited to see where this goes!

Reviewer: pequeno Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2021 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 3

wow!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2021 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 3

The giant college girls turned out to be evil, its like she's never read fetish media before.

 

Rookie mistake.

Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2021 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 3

Hmm, Emily definetly wants to use her sexually for her lust and is quick to get angry and threaten more violence. But she does have a lot of gentle petting and cooing mixed in. Not sure if it's just because Heather is a particularly big shrinkie, Emily just finds her sexy, or if the couple does treat obiedient shrinkies well. Guess we'll find out when the partner Lex arrives and if Heather sees any other shrinkies in the house and if so the state they're in. Emily kept using they/them for Lex so I wonder if there's going to be a twist reveal that they're a trans woman. I think the level of care or abuse Heather recieves in the coming days is going to depend on how quickly she can get over being used by other women.

 

It's a little intimidating how astute of an observer Emily is to Heather's situation. I'm trying to guage how Zoe filters back into the story. I can't see Emily handing her new pet back over willingly normally. Maybe Heather resists and fights them through some normal abuse and punishment, and Emily proposes handing her back over to Zoe and Jason. Maybe if Emily notices Jason bringing his affair girlfriend over or sees Zoe stomping a shrinky outside or even stops to offer her one to see her reaction. Or maybe somehow either Emily or Lex gets jealous when Heather does give into them and one of them starts enjoying themselves with her more and more then with their committed partner, and in a rage they storm over to her home and toss her at Zoe's feet. Or maybe a few days later Zoe finds out where Heather is and storms over to demand her back, with some shrinky law of ownership on her side.

 

I am curious if Heather never sees her husband and daughter again if we'll have side chapters of her family after her disappearance. Answering the speculation of whether her staying home or escaping would've been the better or worst options. Contrasting on how her time with Emily and Lex goes and how her family acted (Jason openly cheating, Zoe bringing shrinkies back home to torment, etc..).

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2021 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 2

great start

Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2021 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 2

Hmm, devils adovcate but what if there's nothing evil or malicious about Zoe and Jason and Heather is just having a panic attack from the stress? If Jason was just working more and wanted to go out and be with old friends more often. And if Zoe just accidentally stepped on a random tiny shrinky the other day without realizing it? Heather does say the victim was tiny, bones much smaller then even hers. But all the implications are there, Jason's old fling living in the same town, him sometimes staying out all night without, his obsession with his status and achievements(?). Something about Zoe having an immune-crazy attitude and that she got her new running shoes specifically because they were fun to crush shrinkies in.

If she was an average size woman and her shoes were about half of her current size, she'd maybe be around 18" tall now? Wonder if she's big enough to still have protections or rights or if there's a hard height cutoff built into society. The shortest adult with dwarfism recorded was 21.5" tall so Heather might actually still be considered a full human if she just makes it to 24" currently. There was a delivery boy in your "powerful to Plaything" story, who was like a 3ft tall if they were waist height to Amanda Fletcher. Even if she did have protection status at her current size, whose to say she wouldn't experience another shrink attack and end up under 12"?

Interested to see if the lesbian couple she ran away to will turn out to be a good or terrible decision. We'll probably quickly find out if we see shrinkies in their house, either being cared for as friends/lovers or abused and terrified toys and pets the girls use. I worry the story may end up having no good normal size people in it.

For the darkest timeline I hope we avoid, the lesbians turn towards sexually abusing Heather and then for her to either be handed over to Zoe when she catches sight of her while asking if they've seen her and demands her back, or her mom escapes back to her home, only for Zoe to be evil and unleashs her own abuse on her mom and in the coming days Heather is forced to meet Jason's ex-turned girlfriend as he falunts his affair in front of his wife. And if at some point Haether experiences a 2nd round of shrinking into normal shrinky size and Zoe decides she's worthless as a normal shrinky and crushes her then keep her as a servant.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2021 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 2

Poor Heather is having an existential crisis at the worst possible time. Though something tells me she could be making a poor choice here but that's certainly not up to me.  

Reviewer: Weary_Traveler Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2021 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 2

Excited after that ending character description :) Can't wait for chapter 3!

Reviewer: carnage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2021 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent start! Already added this story to my favorites. I'm really excited for what happens next. Nice refrence with Hoka, my teenage sister-in-law is obsessed with those right now.

Reviewer: mani Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2021 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hi sir, i am a big fan of yours.. i always search for your updates and find myself extremely happy when there is an update

a nice start to the story..what i love is to see humiliation from elders (30+,40+)..if you add humiliation faced from elders like her husbands second wife, neighbors etc will be really appreciated..eagerly waiting

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2021 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

Always a great day when we see you dropping a new story for us.

 

Curious to see the mighty Zoey return as well, you've painted her in quite the ominous light.

Reviewer: Weary_Traveler Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2021 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Excited to see a new series! Definitely off to a good start :)

Hope there's at least a bit of F/m or FM/m

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