Date: January 07 2023 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 33
This story has been very thrilling and captivating so far. What I have enjoyed most is how realistic all the characters are and how believable they are in emotional scenes. Each character is likable and makes me want to see them successful and happy. Very few stories I have ever read have had such thoughful and caring characters with beautiful hearts.
What is big for me is that the conflicts in the story is not a central villain, but inside themselves:
Maddy is doing her best to balance being a lover and a maternal caregiver to Nick, but can be a unstable paranoid monster when turned up too high.
Rachel is lonely and wants to be a mother without Nick being her lover, but her flaw is her methods of manipulation and secrecy.
Nick is caught in the middle and is doing his best to adapt and be faithful to Maddy, but her wish is breaking him down and he keeps too much to himself to get the right help.
You do a great job giving them internal monologues that give insights to thier true selves.
I really, really hope this has a happy ending. It hard at the moment as it seems that battle lines are being drawn for Maddy and Rachell to clash.
I can envision, but not fully expecting, that Rachel and Maddy after a lot of conflict and heartbreak over Nick settle thier differences: Nick clears his mind and convinces Maddy that she is his soul mate and no one else. Rachel realises the severity her tresspass and apologises for her a actions. Rachel works out an arrangement with Maddy they she will be his adoptive mother and wet-nurse for Maddy. Nick and Maddy move in with Rachel. Maddy and Nick settle into thier final size and roles to one another. Maddy realizes she can be as motherly as humanly possible to Nick, but also clears her mind that they are still equals as lovers. Nick and Maddy get married, perhaps after a difficult conflict with Maddy’s poisonous mother. Rachel, Nick, and Maddy live happily ever after.
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As a side note, I know there isn’t any giantess growth (like in Hello Neighbor) so far and it is not listed, but I think it would add great suspense. A plot reveal where Rachel also wished that night and in her conflict of will with Maddy, they begin getting larger back and forth to be the biggest alpha-mom.
Author's Response:
Thank you, very much, for your kind words. I´m really happy you liked the development of the characters, and that you found the plot lovely too. You know, it took me quite a while to figure out a lot on the story, but I´m glad it´s going in the right path.
By the way, I like your ideas there, they do sound possible, but... well, in a few chapters you´ll see how this goes. I assure you, I have added some suspense to the plot ;)
Thanks a lot for such a great comment, I´m really glad you liked my story, The-Macromancer. :D :D :D