[Report This]Date: October 19 2021 9:03 AM Title: Dress Up
I like what you are doing with Drew and Casey. However, part of me wonders what is next with the story. There's Taylor, the lawyer, Casey's mom. After all, Drew went to Casey's house as part of a mission and it feels like that part of the story just fizzled out and now Drew is just living with Casey now for the last few chapters.
I guess the positives of Casey is that there's some good hot stuff that is shared with her, such as the foot scene after Drew got caught. That was good. I expected some story to develop after that, but instead we get Ariel. Personally, Ariel just felt like a crazier version of Casey, but I did like how she referred to Drew as an "it".
With this chapter, I love how Drew is basically the gem to her necklace. It's always great to see giantesses use tinies as jewelry, or even clothing. Especially in stories where tinies are common, it's cool to see how tinies are used by the rich and I would love to see other creative ways the rich are exploiting the poor based on their size.
The next stop is at Lydia's place. I don't remember a Lydia so this could be a fun new opportunity to showcase some awesome size play.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
The story very much still has a plan, some big things will be revealed soon.
It might seem like that part of the story fizzled a bit because I wanted to develop Casey and Drew's relationship, and I may have given this a bit more time than neccessary solely for porn purposes honestly.
But trust me, the story will get going again in a big way soonish (there are even some little hints that allude to it in the previous chapter, but shh you didn't hear that from me).
Ariel was just introduced as a fun character and to showcase Casey's personality a bit more to those around her who she considers equal and also to set up this party section.
Glad you enjoyed that, I agree it creates a very fun dynamic and there will be a bit more of that coming up.
Thanks for the reviews though. I appreciate you are enjoying the story, I just worry there wouldn't be enough fetish content if I solely focused on it haha.
[Report This]Date: October 19 2021 8:56 AM Title: Dress Up
Two more incredible chapters, and I still feel like that's underselling it!
You've still got such a wonderful grasp over character in this, in addition to the quality of the writing overal, and I really feel that's setting this apart from many other stories on this site.
And I'd be remiss to not mention the inclusion of even more incredible content, as directed towards Casey's feet and boots. Especially her tossing people into them when freshly worn, along with Drew's horror that she might've worn her boots with the two guys still inside. Although, we don't get any firm confirmation on that just yet, it seems?
Either way, all the best and keep doing what you're doing, man!
Author's Response:
Thank you, that means a lot!
I'm glad you've been enjoying the smut, will be much more of that from Casey haha.
Well, I guess I never did mention what actually happened to those other guys huh... maybe a bonus chapter at some point.
[Report This]Date: October 18 2021 12:40 PM Title: Dress Up
Wonderful new chapter, super hot as well. I'm definitely digging the slight changes in tone. It doesn't betray either of their character arcs and allows you to go pretty much any direction with them - though I'm hoping you stick to the pet approach, haha.
Author's Response:
Next one should be right up your alley.
I hope that I didn't make Casey seem too sadistic at first because she was never really meant to be, more just privileged and kind of a product of the society she lived in. She's more just a no care in the world kind of person that just fucks with tiny people because she can.
In saying that, I'm glad you don't think their development is too forced or anything.
Haha, we'll see what Casey has in store for Drew's future.