[Report This]Date: November 18 2021 9:10 AM Title: Little Errand
Wow, now this was a fun chapter!
Great way to make your return with a Susan chapter. And I love how she planned all this. If she’s going to be a villain, I like how smart you made her to be.
Everything she did to Dwight was fun to watch. She completely dominated him, even before she shrank him.
Also, if she has this shrinking ability, then it’s likely that she shrank Michael. So far Susan shrank people she need to shrink for money. I wonder if she will shrink people for fun, soon. Lol
i can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Glad the Susan chapter finally paid off haha.
And yep, she was pretty meticulous in her planning.
Dwight had no chance from the get go.
Thanks for reading as always!
Date: November 17 2021 10:37 PM Title: Little Errand
amazing chapter! love love love what Susan does to miniscule Dwight. I hope we see what further happens to Dwight in the "tight" place.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
I'm sure we'll get another glimpse of Dwight's predicament.
[Report This]Date: November 17 2021 6:38 PM Title: Little Errand
Wow what a return! I think I can speak for almost everyone when saying this is probably your best chapter yet. Not only do we finally get to meet Susan but we get some nice backstory, nice size comparisons between her and the kids she used to bully from the bracket difference, and ofc her ultimate endgame. Absolutely perfect! Ahhh you have no idea how good it feels to have a great giantess story back in this site again. It’s been a while. How tall is Susan btw? Is she like Casey at 24ft?
My prediction: I think after Susan is eventually beaten, Casey is gonna take control of the company and because drew helped her, she’ll realize that not only was she wrong about him and tinies in general, she’ll prob offer him a job to work in the company to help make it up to him to reinstate back into the higher brackets maybe the same height as his roommate so they can both begin dating ;). But we shall see. Also that shrinking gun should be illegal no? Only the people in charge of the bracket Records should have jurisdiction of growing and shrinking. So that’s another ground of trouble against her.
also I see you took the Twitter advice lolol. I think you gotta follow back to allow DMs between the two people so I sent ya a follow request! :)
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you, very kind words!
Glad you enjoyed all the little components of the chapter, though I wonder if you caught onto a subtle name drop during one of Susan's flashbacks.
Susan is a foot taller than Casey, so 25ft.
Interesting prediction, that's assuming Casey is actually a good person deep down, so I guess we'll see.
The shrinker is definitely illegal, what Susan has is merely an early prototype of an attempt to commercialise the product, it is by no means meant to be in the hands of a regular citizen. Susan has a whole list of felonies adding up against her name doesn't she.
Haha yeah I did, I figured I probably should have a place where people can contact me, especially if I ever start doing commissions. But yep, I opened DM's to anyone and followed back.
[Report This]Date: November 17 2021 12:15 PM Title: Little Errand
Golly, Susan's really completely insane. Like, Joker-level crazyness. She basically married someone just to remain tall. Like, what the fuck?
I hope Casey will get revenge for her dad and will also grew up figuratively - and literally - in future chapters !
Author's Response:
Susan definitely has a few screws loose... let's chalk it up to a bad upbringing. Does explain why Casey is a bit out there too haha.
Not sure how much room Casey has left to grow but I'd bet she is gonna put her all into getting revenge.