Date: October 16 2021 12:13 AM Title: Part 1
Wow this story really turned out really good. It was short ,sweet and to the point. I am agreeing with everyone else in saying brian deserved better. :'(
Author's Response:
yeah :(
Date: October 12 2021 7:21 AM Title: Part 1
I agree with rolanrunn. I would like to see a good ending. I hope.
Author's Response:
well its all done now, kinda sad for my tastes but i think the person i was writing it for liked it!
Date: October 09 2021 8:46 PM Title: Part 1
I really hope that if Brian does eventually get out. His teacher will learn that it was in fact that bully who forced him down and he was the guilty party. It'd make a pretty good twist where Kevin gets punished and stuck in her stomach twice as long Brian did.
Author's Response:
i also like "happy" endings where the bad guy is defeated, especially in size stories since so many of them end sadly.
wont say whether or not it ends like that tho but i guess we'll find out 🤷🏽a92;a039;