Reviews For It's Her World
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Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2021 8:32 AM Title: Suzi in Sydney Pt. 1

I love this story, Hope to ser nexts chapters and whats going to happen next!!

Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2021 1:28 AM Title: Suzi in Sydney Pt. 1

Aww darn is the story really completed? Seeing if the giantesses have some kind of morality or plan would've been exciting. Especially with this last giantess. They seem to still have their memories before they turn giant so is Suzi heading straight back to the laboratory because she knows her daughter is there? It would be interesting to see what her plans are, turn her daughter into a giantess, keep her as a pet, overwhelming drive to get pleasure from killing her, or something else?

Reviewer: La Giantess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2021 2:43 PM Title: Ayako in Japan

Still doing good! Let's see what comes next, but considering your style, I'm expecting good material!

Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2021 4:36 PM Title: Ayako in Japan

This story seems fun.  Looks like a war of the worlds sort of thing where girls are growing into giants and devouring and destroying humans for fun.  Their previous minds altered into their current minds so they don't even remember being human, they just remember they like eating, crushing, and playing with small people.

As for ideas:

A milf who smiles and talks sweet and friendly but casually eats and crushes people and does lewd things.

Keeping with the war of the worlds theme: Cities beset by dozens of giant girls or more, with indications that this is happening all over the world. The girls we've already been introduced to might make some friends among the other giant girls and do stuff together.

Militaries fight back but the girls just don't seems to get hurt, their bodies absorbing the energy of the attacks so bullets and shells just fall off and lasers and nukes just tingle.

I love these sorts of stories so I'm eager to see what you come up with next.

 

Reviewer: Master_Builder Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20 2021 3:07 PM Title: The beginning

Okay, I like what you have so far, but the structure is a bit bricky for my taste. Making the narration in several paragraphs helps to make reading easier. 

Reviewer: La Giantess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2021 9:32 AM Title: The beginning

Nice for a beginner, and I liked that story more than the last (that involved a cat). By the way, I'd just recommend to organize better the block of texts, maybe using a new line for every speech, so it's better to read.

Please don't get me wrong, I loved your text, it was little but ok for a nice quick read. For me, it deserves five stars.

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