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Reviewer: santiago1985 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2023 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: Galatcha of Brobdingnag

I like the way you write.
And this story is very sweet. Although as superKirby pointer, a little too non-detailed for my taste, specially the interactions between galatcha and the lilliputians.
But the story as a whole is nice and cute though



Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment, and I appreciate any criticism, it helps me grow as a writer.

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