[Report This]Date: March 08 2022 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 11: SIMON SAYS... FACE THE MUSIC!
What a great story! I look forward to anything you write that turns out this wholesome!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it!
I really did want to write something gentle and wholesome. Like Milla says at the end, of Chapter 11, the world is already such a hard place to live right now. We deserve a little easy happiness sometimes. That's what Simon and Beck will have. Easy happiness. Stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: February 27 2022 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 11: SIMON SAYS... FACE THE MUSIC!
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
You won't have to wait long!
Date: February 27 2022 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 11: SIMON SAYS... FACE THE MUSIC!
Looking forward to more of this delightful tale.
[Report This]Date: February 26 2022 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 11: SIMON SAYS... FACE THE MUSIC!
Excellent addition. I've been looking forward to each chapter as it came out. You've got a great relationship between the characters here and its so much fun to read.
In your first chapter you wrote you were inspired by. "I'm A Little Curious... About Your Taste". I real all of it when he released his last chapter and can see now the inspirations. I also got a bit inspired by that story, this story, and a few others and am working on a few of my one giantess couple stories. A couple are more slice-of-life but actually connect together for one over-arching plot(Those will be out here soon in installments and you'll be listed as an inspiration). But there's another that' s become very plot focused and centered on a character arc(that just broke 20K words which is crazy to think about) and that I'm waiting until the whole thing is finished.
All that to say, hopefully you'll enjoy what I've written just as much as I've enjoyed this.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Jsmith20! Much appreciate the patronage. I look forward to reading what you come up with once it's complete!
Date: February 26 2022 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 11: SIMON SAYS... FACE THE MUSIC!
holy shit loved chapter 10 and want more like it. But loved it so FAR!
Author's Response:
Yeah - chapter 10's a doozy, eh? By far my most popular I think.
Just a good old-fashioned sexy romp. And who doesn't love that?
[Report This]Date: February 26 2022 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 11: SIMON SAYS... FACE THE MUSIC!
Wow!! You're doing an EXCELLENT job with that one! This is by far the best Gentle/Willing/Non-fatal vore story I've read so far!
The way you write it makes the story, which is pretty well detailed, reach a sort of poetical feeling. The love between Simon and Beck, Milla being the overprotective but still very loving and not boring sister (and girl, look! She has my nickname!!)... it's easy to see that you're putting a lot in every detail of this work of art! I'm enjoying all the ways you're playing with words, some puns here and there, and the text which gives us all-detailed expressions of the feelings and situations, without being boring! Simply the best!
Really, you deserve so much more than just five starts, but this is everything I can give you now. I almost can't express how pleased I feel for having read your story, and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Wow, that's high praise Milla! Especially for somebody with the same name as Milla Groff, haha.
That's exactly what I was going for with this story: the gist of the romance doesn't work unless the characters are really fleshed out IMO, and even though Simon's sister isn't part of the couple itself, her relationship with Simon informs so much of his personality and his worldview, so making her fully fleshed out was vital.
Keep up the reading! I think you'll like what comes next!