Date: December 16 2021 4:20 PM Title: The mistake
Hey, just a suggestion, but what if there was a sequel in which it is the sister's turn to be the plaything? I believe some people might also get a kick out of a male giant :P
[Report This]Date: November 30 2021 9:26 AM Title: The mistake
Great chapter! The end is really great at making me look forward to the next chapter and the slow buildup is great for character building. Kinda sad that she didn't buy herself a present from his money (connected to the app maybe?) but can understand if it's not in your vision.
Very much looking forward to how the story continues!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I still plan to do that. Maybe with an update from the shrinkbox.
[Report This]Date: November 22 2021 3:10 PM Title: The mistake
Does the shrink box only shrink and change what they experience? Or does it also transform? Like could he end up as her thong? Or even transformed into a part of her body like her breast or butt to be teased?
Just trying to see what it is capable of!
Author's Response:
That's a nice thought! That would give her even more options later on. Will think about it, if you have any ideas, let me know. You can also write me an email: yougts@gmail.com
Date: November 22 2021 5:21 AM Title: The mistake
Really enjoying this story. Very curious to see what Luna has planned!
I know for one thing, he seems like he may be taking a trip up her butt some time soon with how much rougher she is being.
Would she view him as a snack too and let him take the long way? I can’t recall if you feature that in your stories!
No matter, looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yes I plan for him to take the long way as a piece of food. But she'll use the app to make it a bit more bearable for him ;)
Date: November 21 2021 2:13 AM Title: The mistake
Mmmm... My post-horny self still wants her to get somehow caught just for the hell of it, even if it is an alternate ending, but still, great read.
As a side note, the shrinking process makes him not need to eat or anything, but it doesn't stop bodily functions, does it? I imagine him getting a bit of payback at her by shitting in her mouth or smth, dunno.
Author's Response:
Hmm, I think the bodily functions just stops. :) An alternate ending could be an option though!
Date: November 13 2021 8:36 PM Title: The mistake
Loving it so far.....love foot play too!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: November 07 2021 11:57 AM Title: The mistake
May I ask if the sister might get caught at perhaps the end? Dont get me wrong, this story's hot, but it kinda rubs me the wrong way the sister getting away with this, but that's probably just my justice boner talking. Also, how does she think it will go once they get back from vacation and there's nobody home and the entire place is just as they left it if a bit dusty?
Author's Response: Thanks for the interest! I'm sure that she will come up with a solution in the end :)
[Report This]Date: November 06 2021 3:24 PM Title: The mistake
This is a great start. The scenario that the rest of the family won’t know that Luna has brought her shrunken brother is perfect, probably blaming that Levi is still a teenager for why he won’t text his parents. It will be fun to see what Luna does with Levi.
A suggestion would be an interaction involving the nipple. Either Luna would use it to make Levi more obedient by saying she would make him so small that he would get lost inside her breast. Or she puts him on there and puts a tight swimsuit over him. Letting her nipple harden to push his small frame against the fabric
Author's Response:
Thanks! He'll definitely end up in her bikinitop!
[Report This]Date: November 06 2021 2:28 PM Title: The mistake
Fantastic start. I love that you're including jewelry and accessories. It's great to see someone thinking outside the box and not just doing feet content.
I love when the tiny is used as anything his Goddess wants.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I agree, there's so much more that can be used to dominate tinies :)
[Report This]Date: November 06 2021 10:17 AM Title: The mistake
Great start! Salivating for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks, nice wordplay ;)
[Report This]Date: November 06 2021 8:00 AM Title: The mistake
Brilliant start to things so far!
The characterisation of both Levi and Luna is excellent, and the scenario itself is the perfect facilitator for a great many unpleasant situations - from Levi’s perspective, of course.
Out of interest, what sort of things are you expecting to include in this as things go on, mate? I know for myself, the tease about inshoe entrapment for a 10km run peaked my interest, but I assume you’ve got a broader sense of the things Luna wants to do?
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Well, I want Luna to have a great vacation and just go with the flow to casual dominate her brother. So yeah, the inshoe entraptment will propbably happen :) If you have any ideas, let me know :)
[Report This]Date: November 06 2021 5:03 AM Title: The mistake
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: November 06 2021 3:41 AM Title: The mistake
Great stuff, mate! Will be there a next chapter for this?
Author's Response:
Thanks! I plan on multiple chapters
[Report This]Date: November 06 2021 1:21 AM Title: The mistake
Great story so far, looking forward to more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks :)