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Reviewer: BabyZoe Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2024 2:06 PM Title: The car ride

I just discovered the story. Bring a tongue ring is an incredible thought, at the whim of a young woman's powerful tongue and mouth. Great writing skills!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2021 5:18 AM Title: The car ride

An interesting idea for something for Luna to buy is an earring depending on how small she can make Levi when she can use the device again to change his size. If the earring had a glass bead that was hollow and one way visibility. Luna could have herself hearing the little voices of Levi without her parents know he was there. There are other ideas but it depends on how small and how much control Luna has over Levi’s size.

Author's Response:

Great idea! Luna has pretty much unlimited amount of control of Levi's size, so keep the ideas coming! 

Reviewer: L200 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2021 10:24 AM Title: The car ride

I see the butt tag <_< will we get him going micro in her butt or something like that?

Author's Response: He's defintely going in, but don't know how yet ;)

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2021 5:12 AM Title: The car ride

Great second chapter. I like that Luna knows already what she can do with tiny people and decides to make it extra special because it is her brother. A sibling bond like never before is growing.
The part that there is toys to use tiny people with at a stop is interesting. It will be fun to see Luna possibly seeking out more toys and jewelry to keep Levi safe while having fun with him.

Can’t wait for the next chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks! If you think of something she could use him with, just let me know :)

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2021 1:07 AM Title: The car ride

Loving every bit of this especially the last one. I can't believe he would get turned on just by being tormented by his own sister. I would love to read more of this. Excellent job as always

Author's Response:

Thanks Dawger! 

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