Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2021 4:53 AM Title: Settling in

Love this chapter! It is great to see that Levi is enjoying her sister a bit too much. I like the addition of the tongue piercing to carry him in her mouth. I wonder what other sort of places she put the bead. I wonder what Luna would think when she notices Levi’s erection. Maybe play with it to make him cum.

Since she doesn’t have her usual toys to please herself, she is going to need a new set for the three weeks. Maybe a new product pops out in that store. A dildo that is customizable for whatever a person wants to do to a tiny person. An inside compartment for them to watch from the outside, check. A tip point to allow them to feel it, check. A pod with liquid to shot them inside, check. There are additional features that can be added but she can purchase those later.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: L200 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2021 2:13 AM Title: The mistake

Mmmm... My post-horny self still wants her to get somehow caught just for the hell of it, even if it is an alternate ending, but still, great read.

As a side note, the shrinking process makes him not need to eat or anything, but it doesn't stop bodily functions, does it? I imagine him getting a bit of payback at her by shitting in her mouth or smth, dunno. 

Author's Response:

Hmm, I think the bodily functions just stops. :) An alternate ending could be an option though! 

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2021 5:18 AM Title: The car ride

An interesting idea for something for Luna to buy is an earring depending on how small she can make Levi when she can use the device again to change his size. If the earring had a glass bead that was hollow and one way visibility. Luna could have herself hearing the little voices of Levi without her parents know he was there. There are other ideas but it depends on how small and how much control Luna has over Levi’s size.

Author's Response:

Great idea! Luna has pretty much unlimited amount of control of Levi's size, so keep the ideas coming! 

Reviewer: L200 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2021 10:24 AM Title: The car ride

I see the butt tag <_< will we get him going micro in her butt or something like that?

Author's Response: He's defintely going in, but don't know how yet ;)

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2021 1:07 AM Title: The car ride

Loving every bit of this especially the last one. I can't believe he would get turned on just by being tormented by his own sister. I would love to read more of this. Excellent job as always

Author's Response:

Thanks Dawger! 

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2021 3:24 PM Title: The mistake

This is a great start. The scenario that the rest of the family won’t know that Luna has brought her shrunken brother is perfect, probably blaming that Levi is still a teenager for why he won’t text his parents. It will be fun to see what Luna does with Levi.
A suggestion would be an interaction involving the nipple. Either Luna would use it to make Levi more obedient by saying she would make him so small that he would get lost inside her breast. Or she puts him on there and puts a tight swimsuit over him. Letting her nipple harden to push his small frame against the fabric

Author's Response:

Thanks! He'll definitely end up in her bikinitop! 

Reviewer: HerPetJ Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2021 10:17 AM Title: The mistake

Great start! Salivating for more. 

Author's Response:

Thanks, nice wordplay ;) 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2021 5:03 AM Title: The mistake

Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Thanks! 

Reviewer: frankstergirl Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2021 1:21 AM Title: The mistake

Great story so far, looking forward to more :) 

Author's Response:

Thanks :)