[Report This]Date: February 05 2022 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
What a nice chapter!
I just love how forward, yet loving Melissa is. I love how she goes straight for the kinky stuff, but doesn’t make it weird.
She’s written in a way that seems like she has experience and I love it. While our main character is concerned about his height, she continues to not make a big deal about it and continue like it’s a regular date.
Wow, if his hand is noticeably smaller, then he should be extra small today. I wonder if he’s like a small child now.
Now we just need Melissa to drop him off, not at his own house, but at Lillian’s house because maybe he’s too short to open his own door. So now he has to ask Lillian for help. And then Lillian has to “babysit” him.
I like the way where this is going. Or maybe that’s my imagination taking over. Lol.
Either way, I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you TomSpeedy, I'm glad that Melissa was a well received character. I'll give her some more time alone with Jonathan later on. And also, something really fun will happen in a few chapter, but I don't wanna spoil anything here.
I hope you like the scene after he gets home. I'll post the next chapter in a couple days :')