I just love how clueless Jonathan could be sometimes. It makes it so much more fun to see Lillian make her plan go well. If Jonathan was smart, this story would’ve ended so soon and the fun would’ve been over. I think you nailed the dynamic pretty well. 

I do agree with Lillian that Melissa is ruining her plans. Imagine if Melissa was out of the picture. Lillian could simply force Jonathan to stay and no one would look for him. So that’s another good point in having Melissa be in the story. She keeps it slow and steady and makes Lillian work to keep Jonathan as her pet. 

Hopefully before Jonathan leaves her house, maybe Lillian could have another physical intimate experience with Jonathan. 

Well, either way, I’m sure the next chapter will be really fun. I can’t wait!