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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2022 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 4

Wow, that chapter was amazing! Once again, I love the little schemes that Jackie does to ensure that Denver gets to experience this torment. 

The use of the video cameras, overacting on the stairs, the Netflix show and use of the bathroom was perfect to help make Denver suffer. 

I like how you had many of his senses available this time. It must be crazy for him to think about all the new sensations he must be feeling. 

This is my favorite chapter so far and I can’t wait for the next one!



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