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Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2009 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Atonement

To answer your question, I don't know. I think she really means it, but if cornered, she will probably act like she says Nicole will do in this situaltion. But, to be honest, I don't think she has a choice. She can't go back, and that's that. So it isn't logical... but niether are people. So I don't think so, but I won't be suprised otherwise

I like where this story is going. A gold star for you.

Tighten up the scale and I hope to see you work soon.

Zalrus IX



Author's Response: She's definitely caught between a rock and hard place.  The question is whether or not she'll be willing to risk her life for absolute freedom or sell out our protagonist (again) for survival (would that even work?).  To be honest, I haven't decided yet.  I need to think about her character some more and hopefully let *her* make the call.  She is the title character, after all. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2009 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Atonement

*Reviewer does imitation of "Arnold Horshack" from WELCOME BACK, KOTTER...including frantic waving of upraised right arm.*

"Oh! Oh-oh! Oh-oh! I trust her! I trust her!"

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