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Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 12 2022 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rescue

Wonderful read.  Did notice slight discrepancy in story.  Early chapters had the shrink ray only affecting one person at a time, even when the shrunken girls were on a person.  Girls on them didn’t shrink again.  But then this chapter has 2 tiny folks next to each other but grows back only one.  It’s said that is how it works.  Tiny ended up on the re-enlarged girl.  Then now the shrink ray can’t grow back the tiny without turning normal girl into giant.  Other than that it was a great chapter or ending.  Thanks for uploading.



Author's Response:

Seems like a bit of a nitpick, considering I’m not a professional writer and do this for free.  But to each their own I guess. 

Reviewer: Rolanrunn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2022 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rescue

Sorry, I actually liked your story. It’s my first time rating a story on this site.



Author's Response:

All good, man!  Glad you enjoyed the story! 

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