Diane asking Camille whether she can pick up Theo instead of just asking Theo himself...it's like Diane doesn't  acknowledge him as a fully-fledged person. Also, that's multiple women that have shown some interest in Theo at this point. I wonder what the deal is with their interest in someone so small (other than the obvious answer of this being a fetish story.)

The general arc of this story has been fascinating so far. First, there was the fear and general sense of being overwhelmed when Theo learned about Atlasians, followed by hopefulness when they all seemed to be pretty nice. Things are getting worse for him every chapter since then, however, with all of the threats, intimidation, and general displays of domination. It really makes me look forward to more world building. I really wanna know what the whole story of the Atlasians is and what's actually going on.

I love the dynamic here. Camille seems to have a strong protective nature, and while they've only just met, they seem to have a good natural chemistry with one another. 

Adolescent female Atlasians seem to have a bit of a dominant streak once they hit their first growth (for reasons explained), so there is some worry for how Roxanne will behave around Theo. I'm holding out hope for a very gentle giant, at least when it comes to her interactions with our main character.