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Reviewer: titanic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2022 12:37 AM Title: The Crush

Straight up laying on top of Theo as he tries to run is pretty damn forceful and beyond just flirting. It’s clear she thinks she’s just being playful, but she still doesn’t understand the power/weight disparity here.

    

I’m a little confused why Theo thinks he needs to hide in this situation. After “She sat up, pulling him up with her.” I thought they were just sitting next to each other on the couch? Which seems innocent enough. I must be picturing the scenario wrong

    

Laying right back down on top of Theo, but with even more weight this time, is a questionable decision. Gen just saw that her previous actions already had him shaken up. Seems like they’re both making some poor decisions under pressure.

    

It’s not really important, but is this trip to university Gen (and maybe Camille’s) first real interaction with normal humans? At least since their growth spurts? It kinda feels like it might be, since Gen clearly doesn’t grasp just how fragile normal people are compared to herself.

I genuinely laughed at Theo’s decision to bail out a window upon discovering Gen in his room. He’s right, Camille was crystal clear that it’s his responsibility to make sure nothing happens. Alas, defeated by a window. And speak of the devil, here’s Camille.

Reviewer: Cinnamon_Toast Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2022 2:54 PM Title: The Crush

This was a nice read! I’m excited to see where this story goes - It’s very intriguing. 
For Theodore’s sake, I pray that this big misunderstanding is just that. Perhaps Theodore was blacked out for a long while and Camille already knew of his condition, simply coming to check on him. My prayers are with him. 
Once again, this story is very promising, even the “lore” aspects, regardless if you think people will like it or not. I think it makes the world easier to fall into and I appreciate the care put into it. Good job!

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