Date: May 11 2022 12:43 AM Title: Choices
Here’s the moment of truth, and Camille is…completely reasonable and understanding. I guess her earlier warnings about Gen were thoroughly hyperbolic. That's a relief. Theo comforting Gen after what he just went through was very sweet.
It took Camille less than a day to develop real feelings for Theo and start trying to get in his pants. Maybe a bit on the fast side, but it’ll definitely keep the story moving along at a good clip.
So Atlasians are just really comfortable being physical with other people in general. Again, certainly good for justifying all sorts of scenarios in the story.
“You know I could still just say no, too, right?” “No you couldn’t” She didn’t mean it that way, but damn Camille, could have chosen your words better. It's probably hard to keep in mind how all sorts of things could be misinterpreted given the power disparity.
Theo’s a brave man going in for the kiss, good on him for making the move.
“You come at the queen, you [best] not miss.” Camille’s comin’, yo.
Author's Response:
It’s all in the game.
[Report This]Date: May 09 2022 3:19 AM Title: Choices
From their natural chemistry in the first handful of chapters, I had a feeling that the relationship between Camille and Theo would inevitably progress beyond the brother/sister dynamic, but I certainly wasn’t expecting it to happen so soon! Good on Theo, man. He’s a charming little guy for sure. Kuddos!
Camille is remarkably confident and straightforward, and while her overprotectiveness (and size) can make her downright terrifying, she is for the most part thoughtfully aware of Theo’s position and limitations, even when he is not, and I love her for that. Can’t wait to see how their relationship evolves.
I’m overjoyed to see Gen’s character development this chapter. It’s great to see her become a little more considerate and attentive, picking up on Theo’s wordless cues and thus giving him a little more control.
I am so, so excited for the introduction of Roxanne, the start of the semester, answers to many lingering questions, etc. Praying for another chapter soon! Thank you for this story.
[Report This]Date: May 03 2022 1:12 PM Title: Choices
This is an easy going nice little story.