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Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2023 9:21 PM Title: Heroes, Succubus, and the Beach ch. 9

Not bad. I'm not a big fan of shrinking but you did this quite well. Can't wait to see what comes next.



Author's Response: Thank you. There will be more shrinking but nothing permanent. Shrinking in the universe by succubus is not permanent. The universe abhors mass transfer so it is temporary, lasting about an hour.

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