Date: August 08 2022 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day
This is a lengthy chapter, but it never lacked in quality. Giantess characters' trust and readiness to take part in action are developed or characterized here, with a focus on their activities. To witness a peaceful plot, as well as a good mix of giantess items and story.
It's also nice that Jake gets some character development here with what he would do when he grows up. This is exactly what you'd anticipate. I love how well he gets along with Kacey; he's a real soldier.
A lot of different things happened in this chapter that made it one of the greatest thus far. Wish there were more.
Thanks, this one of my first forays into longer stories, and I think it's a bit shaky in parts and I think that more shorter chapters would have benefited it. Still I think it's a good slice of life plot and the characters care a lot about each other which is nice.
Date: April 16 2022 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 8: Vacation
Great as always, very light hearted chapter. Would like to see one chapter focusing on one couple specifically rather then both at once, but that’s just me, only for one chapter. Feel like it would be good after a lot of group antics.
Date: April 16 2022 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day
Very fun chapter. Keep up the good work, GreenAnon!
Thanks, I often find myself coming back to this setting and these characters after more plot heavy stories. The slice of life stuff is a nice breather.
Date: March 12 2022 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 7: Comic Convention
I’m a big fan of the slice of life fun here, although I would of loved to see a bigger and grander exploration of the rules and punishments surrounding stealing tinies.
Regardless, I would love to see more.
The whole battle for Tiny Rights is kind of going on in the background of the story but I don't really want it to be the focus. I've been kind of avoiding any kind of overarching plot because I want this story to have a slightly relaxed atmosphere if that makes sense. I might explore it a bit more in a future installment, but the focus is going to remain on the protagonists and their relationships with each other.
Date: February 27 2022 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 6: One More Day
Chapter 6 was a top-tier entry. Jake is by far, my favorite tiny male character to have graced this website, and we get to see him be a bigger man for once this chapter. Kacey's stallion comment was gold-pressed latinum.
You've also established a very good dynamic between Ash and Andy. That was one relationship I was a bit iffy on, but seeing Ash's "play" for lack of better terms, and Andy's enthusiastic reciprocation, was a very fun segment. Liked that classic Cheerio's callback to "Honey, I shrunk the kids." At least, I assume that's what that scene was referencing. Lot's of tiny guys and gals end up in these cereal situations. It's a crisis I tell ya!
Of course, we get to see Kacey be the bigger woman, resisting the temptation to just string Jake along and take him back by force. I suppose Love is the strongest Force of all. Not as strong as the High Ground, though.
Author's Response: You can consider it a Honey I shrunk the Kids reference, and yeah Andy has come around to enjoying Ash's games now that he knows her a bit and is sure they are in fact just games. Kacey and Jake are very much in love, what I wanted to show was that their feelings would endure even if the power dynamic between them changed.
Date: February 25 2022 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 6: One More Day
A very extensive chapter, it’s long but never once felt lacklustre. Full of actions with some development or characterisation for the giantess figures in how they respect trust and willingness to engage in actions. For a gentle story that’s always great to see; as well as with a balance of giantess stuff with story.
Jake also gets some characterisation here with what he would do when he would be big, and it’s better the. What you would expect. Man is a true trooper and it’s great seeing how he gets along with Kacey.
This overall was probably the best chapter so far, had a little bit of everything. Hope to see more.
Thanks, I had hoped to flesh out the tiny characters a bit, looks like it went well.
Date: February 25 2022 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 6: One More Day
That was awesome man. I don't know what to emphasize other than I loved it. This concept was executed perfectly. I hope that maybe you do it again one day for another big event for the two, or maybe even Andy and Ash. Jake's priorities for the day showed just how awesome he is as a person.
I don't want full size days to happen often for the characters or they lose some of the magic, but I can't rule anything out. Andy and Ash would probably spend a full size day mostly with each other. As far as Jake's priorities yeah, if you've got one day you've got to make the most of it. Kacey still has some confidence issues, Jake on the other hand has definitely come around to the realization that he should have always been with Kacey, and he'd still want to be with her even if he was normal again.
Date: February 25 2022 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 6: One More Day
Pretty cool idea. Not something you really see in size stories. I especially like the scaled up shrinkie instead of a return to normal. The shrinking giving victims superhuman abilities is something I like from your various stories. Nice little bit of cosmic balancing.
I always like to make shrinking victims tougher, sometimes with a few other powers. It makes things easier on the characters emotionally, and I like to open up more interaction possibilities.
Date: February 17 2022 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Office
Dang, this is one of the best gentle stories I've read on this site. You've got a nice balance between character and giantess interaction. Ash is a tad overwhelming, but it works rather nicely in this context. Jake is by far one of the more compelling tiny/shrunken characters, and it made his exchanges with Kacey rather spectacular.
I like Jake and Kacey as people who are were on opposite ends of the social spectrum but who were friends in spite of that, and even when their social status reverses they remained friends, and eventually more. The background of this story is pretty dystopian, but for our characters they're able to rise above it on the strength of their relationships. Ashley and Andy have a more extreme relationship than Kacey and Jake do, one more typical of the giantess-tiny interaction on this site, but I like to think they care about each other too.
Date: February 17 2022 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Office
Well I loved this chapter too, which I knew I would.
To your previous response to me. I absolutely get that shared enjoyment thing, I have a story I'm working on that has that similar play dynamic. And I agree about the near invincible thing. I never understood how people enjoyed the dying aspect. I want to be able to live through everything and get to experience all of it, not just die so easily. (To each their own, but I will always go for the near invincibility).
I really appreciated what you did with Andy's character in this chapter, getting to see him be afraid showed that he's still adjusting. Ashely coming to his defense was so satisfying and I hope you continue to show more of the dynamic between the two.
Sometimes a cruel giantess and danger IS fun, but that's not what I like to write personally. Anyways yeah Andy and Ashley have a much less certain dynamic than Kacey and Jake do, but at the same time I thin theirs is still a healthy and loving one.
Date: February 16 2022 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Office
Gentle giantess office ladies. That's one of my favorite scenarios. This chapter really checked just about every box. Bravo!
Author's Response: Office Ladies are fun in general, adding a giantess aspect just makes it better imo. I thought it would be fun to put Kacey in an unfamiliar environment, it's only fair given the kind of stuff Jake has put up with.
Date: February 13 2022 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 4: Meeting new people
Well, I caught up and I have to say that I am loving this story. The slice of life is amazing. That Jake has a job and can still do things is great.
I'm not normally into micro interactions that small, but you sold it in chapter 2. I still prefer the regular 3 inch stuff though.
I think it's great seeing the interactions between Kacey and Jake. I love the building of her musk to toy with him and how she uses her old clothes as projectiles for him. The way that Jake has learned how to resist her a little bit is amazing. I really like that no matter what she's still concerned about him if she feels he actually gets into any pain. It's important to show that the connection is genuine between the two. Without that connection remaining the relationship between a normal and a tiny loses its spark in my eyes.
It would be interesting if she started using more of his durability and kept him in her sock while walking around, maybe even exercising with Ash at the same time. While of course being worried about Jake at first.
I think the durability should extend to being eaten, even if you don't cover it in this story it would be nice to add an extra layer of comfort to Jake and Andy, but it is your story.
Ash and Andy is very intriguing. Despite Ash's very playful nature she still wants to take care of him properly. She can certainly get ahead of herself sometimes but, she's a great character.
And Kacey working at the office is very cool. Hopefully Ms. Black will come around a little bit.
Kacey definitely cares for Jake, it's one of the things I won't compromise on. Everything between the two is for their own enjoyment, if that makes sense.
As for being eaten, yeah they could totally survive that. I'm not 100% on a vore scene, but I do like my tinies borderline invincible.
Date: February 12 2022 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 4: Meeting new people
Ms. Black obviously doesn't approve of how Kacey lives her life, but knows that they do love each other. I'm sure this is an attempt at changing how she lives her life a bit, force some good habits (like basic hygiene).
Date: February 11 2022 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 3: Size Shift
Chapters keep getting better and better, am loving the fact that around the bizarre situation the main 2 protag continue to love each other drama free.
I'm in love with the idea of a giant girl and a tiny guy dealing with bizarre situations like this, it's mostly what the story will be.
Date: February 11 2022 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day
Absolutely amazing story, the loving balance of her power as his new guardian while still being caring towards the Male protag is wonderful.
I would love to see more of his characterisation expressed however.
Looking forward to more.
Date: February 11 2022 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day
Hey greenanon! Nice to see you joining us here from the boards. You know I love your stories and this one especially. Cant wait to see the smellier depths this story goes as they go through their daily lives. Keep up the great work!